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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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“Nothing,” said Alice with a throaty murmur. Her tone of voice washed
over Dana and warmed her body with the passion she could hear in it.
Leaning forward to trail her lips against tan skin, Alice ducked her
head down to whisper in Dana’s ear, a quiet but unwavering conviction
in her words, “Nothing is funny about the way you look now, Dana.
Nothing could ever be funny about how beautiful and sexy and fucking
perfect you look and how you feel… god,” Alice seemed to shudder and
Dana groaned as she finally felt long fingers slip inside of her pussy
in an easy motion as if that was where they had always belonged.
“Nothing is funny about that. But most of all, nothing in the fucking
world could be funny about how much I want to taste you right this
second.” Pulling away in a sensual gesture, her lips once again
dragging a path across Dana’s cheek, Alice gazed down with dark eyes as
she said, “There is nothing is funny about that.”
In a whispering and elegant motion that strangely reminded Dana of
seeing the ballet with her mother as a small girl, Alice swept down her
body, fingers pulling painfully away and Dana groaned at the loss
though she was comforted by the knowledge something much better would
be replacing them. As if working in synchronization with the athlete’s
thoughts, she felt the familiar and reverent press of Alice’s lips
against her thighs as she gently pushed her legs open. Shivering and
arching off the bed, Dana gasped at that first slow lick at her pussy.
Her was tongue rough and wet. Had it always felt this good to have
Alice’s mouth on her? Was it always this exquisite to feel the push of
soft lips on her pussy and the languid lick of a tongue inside of her
reaching deep? Then there was playful brushing of teeth against her
clit, making her hips jump upwards only to be stilled by firm hands
holding her close. She hadn’t remembered it being this good but oh god,
how it was.
Unable to stop herself, feeling compelled by something she couldn’t
quite explain, Dana tangled her hands in Alice’s dark blonde hair and
looked down at the writer and that was what did her in. Looking down to
see Alice buried in between her thighs, wearing a face that was
crinkled with concentration and focus and determination. All of those
things and more were what succeeded in pushing Dana over the edge when
Alice’s tongue slid inside her deep as she angled her teeth at that
perfect odd angle to drag against Dana’s clit. The look the blonde wore
told the tennis player that in this moment all Alice wanted was to make
Dana come long and hard and into her mouth over and over. When Dana
realized this, she couldn’t stop herself from coming but what made her
come again and again was continuing to look down and watching as Alice
didn’t stop. Watching as she kept licking and kissing and sucking at
her pussy and finally Dana felt her eyes fluttering involuntarily shut,
preventing her from watching anymore and signaling that this orgasm
would be the last. At least for now.
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!