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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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Orgasm hit her fast and hard and powerful and Alice knew if it had been
any other day, any other month, any other year, she would have
succumbed to sleep and that damn warm fuzzy wave of contentment that
always seized her after she came with such force her entire body, all
the way down to her pinky toes, could feel it. But it wasn’t any other
day or month or year. It was the day and the month and the year that
she was with Dana again. That they were finally reunited and making
love in that way Alice thought only existed in the cheesy lesbian
version of the Kama Sutra that Bette thought she had safely hidden in
her and Tina’s bedroom.
Needless to say she pushed that wave of contentment as far away as it
could possibly go because the last thing Alice wanted to feel was
content when there was that persistent wet press of Dana’s pussy
against her thigh. Lifting her leg up hard and smirking when the
athlete moaned and bucked involuntarily into her, Alice smoothly
flipped them over and pressed her leg into the tennis player, chuckling
as Dana squirmed against her, seeking friction that was closer and
harder and certainly all the more real than the teasing touch the
writer was currently employing. All the time hating herself for not
having the patience to torture Alice in this exact way when she had
been removing the blonde’s clothing just minutes ago. Perhaps if she
had known that that such tricks were going to be very shortly used
against her she might have been able. In the meantime, Dana growled in
frustration and thrust upwards and into Alice, deciding that if she
wasn’t going to be given that friction she so desperately wanted she
would simply take it for herself, all the while vehemently promising
herself that she would pay the blonde back for this in the future and
doing so would be a highly enjoyable process.
“Stop playing, Al,” demanded Dana in a low growl, managing to somehow
sound threatening in her desire, causing the blonde to chuckle low in
her throat as she slid into her, kissing the athlete’s cheek as she
adjusted her leg yet again. Her hands reached out, grasping and
demanding, pulling Alice’s fingers down to her pussy and trying to
slide them inside, groaning as the writer fought against her. “Alice,”
Dana practically screamed her name, unable to understand why the blonde
was doing this to her. Then she felt a feather light caress on her
features and she blinked slowly. Looking up into warm brown eyes that
were loving but also gently amused, Dana scowled slightly and said,
“What’s so funny?”
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!