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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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There was silence then the rustle of sheets as Alice moved up her body
to hold her close and Dana sighed as she felt the writer rest her chin
on her shoulder to spoon her from behind. She took her time to regain
her breath and her wits then she peered back into smiling brown eyes, a
grin automatically tugging at her lips at the sheer happiness she saw
there.
“So,” Dana drew the word out slow and playful, lifting an eyebrow for
effect and smiling when Alice chuckled in immediate response.
“So?” Alice echoed with droll humor, doing a fair imitation of Dana’s
vocal inflection and managing to lift her eyebrow in the exact same
way.
A smirk now fully formed on her lips and turning in Alice’s arms in
order to better see the blonde’s response, Dana said in tones of
supreme smug satisfaction, “I didn’t do that bad for a lady in
chemotherapy.” Her eyebrow managing to somehow lift higher to help add
to the comedic effect, she added with a scoff, “What’s the score now?”
Bursting into delighted laughter, Alice nuzzled her nose against Dana’s
as she smiled into their kiss. “I think it would be Fairbanks five,
cancer zero,” she replied.
And Dana’s miraculous, hopefully never to be defeated, high score only
continued to increase as their night continued. But that was to be
expected.
—
The little things were what reminded Alice consistently that Dana was
sick. Some people might think that meant she would look at Dana’s
shorter hairstyle or how her skin wasn’t quite as tan as before and
assume they were at fault. But it wasn’t that because although they
were little things they weren’t little enough. Because they were so
painfully obvious that anyone who had seen Dana more than twice and
held some capacity for observation could notice them. Instead it was
things that happened in moments like these that reminded Alice. How she
was the first one to wake up the morning after they reunited and spent
the night making passionate love. Before Alice had always been the one
who slept in and would open her eyes to see a wide awake and tenderly
smiling Dana who often had been keeping herself busy by playing with
the blonde’s ongoing and out of control case of bedhead.
But this particular morning was different because Alice was the one
awake and she was the one playing absently with soft locks of hair as
she watched the woman she loved doze away in contented sleep. Although
while Dana’s hair was shorter, she was fortunate enough to not be
fighting the nefarious yet ridiculously amusing symptoms of bedhead.
Fingering brown strands, Alice found herself wondering what Dana would
look like if they were gone. She knew without any fragment of a doubt
that the athlete would remain beautiful in her eyes. That was a truth
that she couldn’t ever escape because it was part of the reason why the
writer was unable to let go of Dana. All of her life people thought she
was flighty, unable to keep a genuine attraction and love for another
person in the years it would take to have a real connection, and she
always believed them because why would everyone say that if it wasn’t
true?
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!