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    All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)

    Story written on March 12, 2006 by dreiser.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=59925
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    S3 SPOILERS. Alice and Dana begin their romance again, struggling because of changes not only in themselves but their lives and how they see each other.


    Without Helena and her friendship Alice knew she wouldn’t be here now,
    holding Dana in her arms and playing with her hair as the athlete
    shifted just slightly as to snuggle closer. Losing Dana had caused
    Alice to lose herself because for so long she had depended on the other
    woman in such a strange almost symbiotic manner. Not so much that she
    couldn’t survive without the athlete in her life but more that Dana
    gave her life meaning in a way. Focus and purpose and when they broke
    up that was gone and suddenly Alice wondered why she was even here if
    she didn’t have Dana anymore. People might find that ridiculous and
    hard to believe because the writer had such a wide array of friends.
    But they weren’t Dana.


    They didn’t know who Alice was as a person and most of them didn’t
    really want to. Out of everyone that she had contact with back then it
    was only the tennis player that could claim truthfully she had a real
    awareness of what Alice thought of the world and what was truly going
    on inside of her head and heart. The others just saw the jokes and the
    sarcasm and the things that Alice used to protect herself from being
    hurt by letting people see who she actually was. And then Helena came
    into her life and though she and Dana were different in so many ways
    they were exactly alike in the ones that mattered the most. Both of
    them were fierce when it came to defending and protecting those they
    loved most and they were loyal, impossibly and incredibly so. Alice
    knew that Helena would argue the point that if Dana was so loyal how
    could she have treated the writer as she did but for some reason the
    British woman refused to recognize the weight of Alice’s actions in
    regards to Dana in that time. To Alice, the fact that Dana never truly
    tried to run from her and block her from her life by filing a
    restraining order or having her arrested or any other myriad of things
    that most people would have done if they had been in her circumstances
    showed Alice that loyalty. God, that was twisted and horrible and wrong
    to think about but that was the situation and that was how she felt. It
    would be an understatement to say Alice took great comfort in how
    things had recently improved though she despised the circumstances that
    led to this improvement with everything in her.

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    Comments

    1. Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!

    2. wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.

    3. Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.

    4. this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon

    5. This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx

    6. I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.

    9. Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.

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