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    Bette and Tina take time to process – Chapter 16

    Marina: “Hold on now … what’s the matter?”

    Dana: “Sean’s jism was no good.

    Marina: ”Ah well we’ll find you someone else.”

    Tina: “Who? I’ve got two days.”

    Marina: “Well between the four of us we’ll come up with someone. What he has to be healthy, strong, creative, handsome …”

    Tina: “Artistic.”

    Dana: “There’s always Shane.”

    Shane walks up to the table of women.

    Shane: “Hey guys.”

    Dana: “You know … do you have to dress like that all the time?”

    Shane: “Like what?”

    Dana: “Well I wouldn’t be seen on the street with you.”

    Shane: “Yeah?”

    Dana: “Every single thing about the way you’re dressed screams ‘dyke’”

    Alice: “God Dana!”

    Shane: “Sorry man.”

    Dana: “Look if I’m outed I’m screwed Alice alright? Sponsors aren’t clamoring to have their stuff repped by big old lezzie tennis players.”

    Shane: No no no look it’s cool. I totally dig the need to make a living. I’m meeting a client anyway.”

    Alice: “You know you are going to pickle in that self-loathing homophobia I swear.”

    Dana: “Oh yeah? Well you’re going to shrivel in that self-righteous priggishness.”

    Tina: “You guys??”

    Alice: “Alright who would squirt into a jar for you?”

    ***

    Bette and Tina had made good progress on their own but the tension was building. They decided to take Paul up on his offer to call should they need him. They stayed at the spot where they’d released the butterflies to watch the beautiful sunset then walked hand in hand to their cabin to shower and dress for an early dinner. They called Paul afterwards and he suggested they meet at a secluded spot on the property where they could light a campfire and toast marshmallows to make s’mores while they talked.

    “After I quit my job and being so focused on just preparing my body for pregnancy I really didn’t know what to do with myself. My life revolved around peeing on a stick two or three times a month. It was an emotional roller-coaster for me every month to get hopeful only to be disappointed again time after time. I don’t think Bette understands what it was like for me.” Tina explained to Paul.

    “I can’t say that I’ve had much experience with infertility between lesbian couples Tina. However, I do believe that the emotions that you and Bette expressed would be similar for any couple regardless of sexual orientation when you’ve made such a distinction as you two did in designation of your roles. This was new territory for both of you. It’s not surprising that you acted and reacted in what would traditionally happen with the “mommy” and “daddy” in a situation like this.

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    1. BETTE would get TINA warmed up time after time only to pump the brakes when TINA wa ready to make love.DAN was a counselor yet BETTE felt they didn’t need one.BOTH BETTE/TINA was to wrapped up in their own problems to see that this way of thinking was THE PROBLEM .Looking for donors it became what ever the other one wanted not what THEY wanted.BETTE found the donor,BETTE picks the guy to go home with them,BETTE finds the second donor all her choices yet TINA just went along.TINA confides in friends when she should talk to BETTE,TINA inseminates herself ,TINA has a reality check when MARCUS turns out to be black.To share all these hidden truths between them and at the end of the day realizes that there is still enough of a spark to ignite the sexual urges for each other gives them hope that this too can be put in the category of what not to do when planning a baby.Let the love they know is there shine thru.Best quote of this ”ze penis,ze pussy ,ze baby” that was one for the history books.pps thanks

      • dunnthat. Thank you for commenting and providing great insight. The point of rehashing all this history is to understand, forgive, and move on. Most importantly to learn from mistakes, pay attention to the warning signs, and not repeat bad behaviours. They are making good progress emotionally and eventually the physical relationship will resume.

    2. Like what mscully said one step at a time, they already have talked much about a lot of their problems and it was very wise to ask Paul for his insight when they were not able to do that by them selves, but they are making progress.

      The flashback that Bette came home earlier to spend time with Tina, trying to reconnect, and that Tina went to the gym, was for me absolutely heart breaking, it showed how disconnect they were.

      I didn’t like the first few chapters, but Bat, you have defiantly my attention again.
      Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

      • Bibi28 – thank you for sticking with the story. I know it was a rough beginning and I really appreciate that you gave it chance. Bette and Tina are going to progress by leaps and bounds before the end of this retreat.

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