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Finally the men went inside, Tina dared to let out the breath she had been holding in. She looked at the brunette woman, still standing protectively in front of her, whose shoulders slumped a little in relaxation.
Then Bette turned around, gave her a stern, but worried look and started to walk back up the stairs.
Not until she felt a pull on her arm did Tina notice her hand was linked with Bette’s, and she was squeezing that hand so tightly as if she depended her life on their connection. In fact, at the moment, she did. Her heart was still beating so loudly in her ear drums because of the incident, because of the unplanned kiss, because of seeing the brunette again, she was alive because of Bette. Touching her free hand to her lips, she couldn’t believe Bette did that for her. And in the present, her only option to stay alive breathing and walking was to trust Bette.
On her way back to her room, the brunette frowned deeply. There was this blunt pain in her chest that was hitting her wave after wave. She tried to be discreet, but her each step on the stairs was shaky. The only reason she did not collapse was the blonde walking behind her. She tightened her grip on the lithe hand in hers, needing to feel the woman within her reach, alive, and safe. As they reached her room, now “their” room, she finally let the whole event sink in.
Tina watched in anxiety as Bette let her hand go, walked over to the couch, fell into it, and held her head with both hands. She couldn’t see her expression, just the woman was breathing heavily, shaking a little bit even. She stood in silence while the maid brought all her stuff into the room, and added a full set of beddings to Bette’s king sized bed, then respectfully left them alone.
Bette wanted to control it, but she could barely breathe. It was a long time since she last had a panic attack. The adrenaline that held her earlier composure dissipated and she was physically falling apart. Days ago, when she took off for the mission to secure a new route, she was hoping to get some clarity, but as soon as she stepped out of the vehicle, six hours away from Chicago, she regretted it. This, today, was something she had been worried sick over for the last couple of days. She was afraid that the blonde would take up on some stupid shenanigans that would put herself in real, live-threatening danger. It was god’s blessing that she got home in time, and right now, she didn’t care whatever Tina was up to, wherever she came from or whoever she worked for, she could only think about the fact that the woman was safe. The fact that Tina was safe was the only thing that kept her from choking.
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!