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Tina could still feel the heat of the brunette on her hand. She wanted to say something, she wanted to thank her, or apologize to her, just something. But as she parted her lips, words failed her, all she could pronounce was the single syllable of the woman’s name. “Bette…”
“No,” Suddenly Bette cut her off. She stood up and pressed close. “no. You don’t say anything, Tina.” She tore apart her shirt as if it were a shackle, and threw it back onto the sofa.
It amazed her, Bette’s physicality. Under the thin layer of her tank top, the muscular outline, the lean stature, the veins and bones, the smooth bronze skin, were dangerously beautiful. But what amazed her more, were her eyes. Gone were the calm and confidence, now uncertainty, insecurity, fear, and all those heartbreaking emotions she had seen in that wounded girl from 11 years ago, reflected in the brown watery orbs, along with her own reflection.
“Whatever you were doing, Tina, cut if out! Just—just stop.” Bette trapped her against the wall. “I don’t care if you were trying to get some secret info from him and give it to some other people. I don’t care. You clearly don’t know what you’re doing.”
“Bette—” Tina wanted to calm her down. Her back was against the wall and Bette’s arms were on either side of her. She was sure that the brunette could strangle her at any given minute.
“When Jorge asks me keep an eye on you, I keep an eye on you. But I failed, nearly failed.”
Did she just see a glimmer of caring in her eyes? Tina wondered. It must have been there, although the next minute it was replaced by anger. Bette cared about her. Bette didn’t want her to risk her life so she must care about her. But what the brunette said next was like a bucket of ice on her warmed heart, like a needle straight to the pink bubbles forming at this ungodly, inappropriate time.
“I, ‘I’ could have died because of you today!” She meant to say that it nearly killed her to think that she could’ve lost the blonde, but she changed her mind at the last second and something else came out. “I could’ve died today so if you even consider doing something like that again, give me a heads up so I know when to plan my funeral.”
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!