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Fix You…. Chapter 1
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Dana was on cloud nine. Well, maybe more like six or seven. She’d just finished her first meeting with Dr. Moreno and things had gone better than she’d dared to hope they would. After looking over all her medical files and examining Dana herself, Dr. Moreno had agreed to work with Dana on returning to the professional tennis courts. Of course, the doctor had made sure that Dana understood that there could be no guarantees and the odds were against Dana ever competing again. But Dana couldn’t help but feel optimistic. Dr. Moreno had a reputation for helping athletes return to their respective sports following what most would have called career-ending injuries. Her hope of being one of Moreno’s success stories was why Dana had flown across the country.
Smiling to herself, Dana made her way out of the doctor’s office and down the hall towards the elevators. Just as she was rounding the corner she saw the elevator doors close shut with a full load of passengers. Taking in the ‘closed for maintenance’ sign on the other pair of elevator doors, Dana turned towards the stairway doors. In light of the good mood she was in she decided to take the stairs. Dr. Moreno’s office was only on the third floor and Dana figured it would be good exercise for her, especially since she would soon begin her rehab with the doctor.
She’d just reached the second floor and was taking a short break to catch her breath and give her legs a rest before beginning down the last flight of stairs when she heard raised voices coming from the other side of the second floor doors.
“You obviously don’t know what the fuck you’re talking about! I’m getting another opinion. You’re all morons.”
Dana, who had turned to look at the raised voice, was still standing at the top of the stairs when a young man who looked to only be in his late teens barreled through the doors. His head was turned towards the doctor he was shouting at and failed to notice Dana before running into her with enough force to send her stumbling backwards. Unable to find her footing in time, Dana found herself hurtling backwards and down the flight of stairs.
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PICKLES O.o Hahahahahaha Thats a good one LOL and this one ‘Alice said something about Dana having had better been run over by a herd of Hippos.’ OMFG! You’re hilarious! Please post another instalment very soon!
LMFAO Alice Pickles!! Girl,that was totally funny!! Cant wait for the next update!!! Awsome job!!
“She was really not excited to talk to the woman who had called her a buttplug.” lol that was so funny! glad you had a good trip – i’m working on an update at the minute so hopefully there’ll be one ready soon! that was a great chapter – can’t wait to find out what happens when Alice and Dana finally meet up! :)
OMG I was sure I was going to die from laughter on the whole Ms. Pickles part, that was an awsome chapter. Poor Dana has it rough, first the car then the stairs, lol thanks for the post, looking forward to the next chapter!
It sounds like Dana’s 5 hour plane ride with her legs aching and her Mom ending her one sided conversation, is something that you recently went through ? Is that the experience you referred to in your comment? LOL! Very funny stuff with Alice Pickles and the jab at Jenny boring Gabby to death with a story about flashlight and a zebra, made me crack up! Keep up the great work.
great story so far. i like where its going. its weird to think of none of them knowing dana. but you are portraying their characters really well.
oh my god! i don’t think i’ve ever laughed that hard reading a fanfic before! alice pickles?! run over by a hippo?! buttplug?! hilarious!!! the whole chapter was great, not just the humor! looking forward to the journey you have in store for us.
LMAO….this is so funny, really hilarious :o)) But it would be great if there were more with B&T.
I’m still LMFAO. Miss Pickles. Would that be dill, sweet, or butter? On the Jenny front, just remember there’s a fine line between parody and scorn, (not that I personally mind if you cross that line). And the thing with Alice and the animals…OMG, you are on a roll! What did they feed you in that mysterious third world country with no internet access? Update soon!
I feel as though everyone’s hit on what I wanted to say, please keep this alive it’s totally awesome!! Loving it…cheers!
This is great! Funny stuff about Jenny…and the Pickles…this is great…Can’t wait for more!
I love this story! Brilliant part, can’t wait till they meet. PLLLLLLLLLLEASE post soon! :)