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Fix You…. Chapter 1
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“Fucking phone. I hate you! Stupid piece of useless…whatever you’re made out of!” Dana glared at her phone while pulling one of her suitcases onto the bed. Unzipping one of the inside pockets she pulled out a new cell phone battery. The clumsy athlete had a habit of dropping her phone and breaking them so for her last Christmas present Howie had given her a new phone and ten new batteries to go along with it. Dana was already on battery number seven.
Putting the new battery in, Dana quickly turned the phone on and dialed the number for her mailbox. The first message was from Howie asking how she was doing and enquiring about her appointment with Dr. Moreno. Dana smiled and made a mental note to call him back. In the next message a woman identified herself as Alice P-something. The name sounded familiar and as Dana continued to listen she realized why.
Shit Shit Shit!! I forgot all about our lunch appointment! I hope she doesn’t think I’m some stuck-up, arrogant, dumb jock or something.
Dana winced during the second message when Alice inquired as to whether Dana planned on making an appearance at some point during their scheduled meeting.
In the third message Dana listened in shock as Alice said something about Dana having had better been run over by a herd of Hippos.
Dana sighed in relief when the final message in her mailbox was from her agent. Opting to call her back first, Dana quickly speed-dialed the number.
“Hey Kim, it’s Dana.”
“Dana! Where have you been? I got a call from Alice Pieszecki’s agent, Nick. You missed the meeting with Alice! What happened? Is everything okay?”
Dana inwardly groaned. She really didn’t want to worry Kim by telling her about her recent stay in the hospital. In addition to being her agent, Kim had been her friend since their college days and would insist on coming out to California to check on Dana herself. With a husband and two kids, Kim was the most caring and down-to-earth person Dana knew. Kim had also been one of Dana’s few supporters the months following her injury, often coming to the hospital or Dana’s house with home-cooked meals and just being a friend during rough days. Although nearly every doctor had told both Dana and Kim Dana would never compete again, Kim refused to drop Dana as a client even after Dana’s Subaru and Gatorade sponsors had dropped the injured athlete. Kim had known Dana for a long time and knew that if it was physically possible, Dana’s stubbornness and hard work would lead her back to the world of professional tennis. If not, Kim would continue on as one of Dana’s best friends and biggest supporters.
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PICKLES O.o Hahahahahaha Thats a good one LOL and this one ‘Alice said something about Dana having had better been run over by a herd of Hippos.’ OMFG! You’re hilarious! Please post another instalment very soon!
LMFAO Alice Pickles!! Girl,that was totally funny!! Cant wait for the next update!!! Awsome job!!
“She was really not excited to talk to the woman who had called her a buttplug.” lol that was so funny! glad you had a good trip – i’m working on an update at the minute so hopefully there’ll be one ready soon! that was a great chapter – can’t wait to find out what happens when Alice and Dana finally meet up! :)
OMG I was sure I was going to die from laughter on the whole Ms. Pickles part, that was an awsome chapter. Poor Dana has it rough, first the car then the stairs, lol thanks for the post, looking forward to the next chapter!
It sounds like Dana’s 5 hour plane ride with her legs aching and her Mom ending her one sided conversation, is something that you recently went through ? Is that the experience you referred to in your comment? LOL! Very funny stuff with Alice Pickles and the jab at Jenny boring Gabby to death with a story about flashlight and a zebra, made me crack up! Keep up the great work.
great story so far. i like where its going. its weird to think of none of them knowing dana. but you are portraying their characters really well.
oh my god! i don’t think i’ve ever laughed that hard reading a fanfic before! alice pickles?! run over by a hippo?! buttplug?! hilarious!!! the whole chapter was great, not just the humor! looking forward to the journey you have in store for us.
LMAO….this is so funny, really hilarious :o)) But it would be great if there were more with B&T.
I’m still LMFAO. Miss Pickles. Would that be dill, sweet, or butter? On the Jenny front, just remember there’s a fine line between parody and scorn, (not that I personally mind if you cross that line). And the thing with Alice and the animals…OMG, you are on a roll! What did they feed you in that mysterious third world country with no internet access? Update soon!
I feel as though everyone’s hit on what I wanted to say, please keep this alive it’s totally awesome!! Loving it…cheers!
This is great! Funny stuff about Jenny…and the Pickles…this is great…Can’t wait for more!
I love this story! Brilliant part, can’t wait till they meet. PLLLLLLLLLLEASE post soon! :)