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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 6

    Story written on July 15, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=66224
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    Season 5ish. More lovin’. more talkin’.

    Bette, still attending to Tina’s breasts, quickly brought her hands to the snap and zipper on her shorts. Having loosed them, she aptly slid the shorts down Tina’s legs until she could reach no further. Tina kicked them the rest of the way off, leaving her completely exposed. "No panties", Bette breathed huskily. "You know I love that."

    Had Bette looked up she would have seen Tina grinning widely while also trying to contain her flaming hips. Bette did not look up. Bette kept her stare on Tina’s beautiful body. She slid slightly down to get a better view of her domain. She softly kissed the valley between the breasts and traveled down, kissing the firm abs and bellybutton. She ran her fingers along the scar on Tina’s belly tenderly and leaned down to kiss it. Tina abruptly put her own hands on the scar, covering it up. "No, Bette. Don’t." Bette, a little shocked, stopped obediently. "Tina, what’s wrong?"

    "You don’t have to kiss me there, babe. I know it’s ugly", sighed Tina.

    "T. Are you kidding me? This scar is beautiful. I love this scar."

    "Bette, you don’t have to say that", Tina frowned.

    Bette brought herself back up to Tina’s side. "Tina, look at me", she instructed. When Tina finally met her gaze Bette smiled warmly. "We have Angie because of this scar. I have you because of this scar." Bette paused as she recalled how afraid she was the night of Angie’s birth. "You were both in a lot of trouble that night. I don’t even want to think about what would’ve happened if we hadn’t made it to the hospital in time", her eyes began to glisten as she neared Tina and kissed her gently on the lips. "I wouldn’t trade this scar for anything in the world."

    Tina propped herself up on one elbow and looked down on Bette. She took in the words slowly as she searched Bette’s watery eyes.  My God, she really means it. Tina kissed Bette and wiped away the lone tear that had managed to escape down the mocha cheek. Bette ran her hands through Tina’s hair and pulled her down, closer. Their breasts prodded each other to new heights of excitement. Tina’s hands wove down to Bette’s taut waist searching for the band of her pants. She unfastened the button and slid the zipper down. With the slack this provided she tentatively slid her hand under the panties. The tiny hairs were moist with excitement as Bette flinched at Tina’s touch. "Yes, T. Please, yes. Take me", she said as she aided in removing her clothing. Tina continued kissing Bette as her hand rubbed the mound gently, working it up into intolerable pleasure. "God, T. Now please", she said as her hips began to move in time with Tina’s hand.

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    1. I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks

    3. Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…

    4. You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.

    8. They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!

    9. Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.

    15. Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks

    16. I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.

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