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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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Dana immediately tensed up. She didn’t want to talk. She just wanted to go along pretending that she was fine. That she was happy with Lara and she hadn’t made a complete and utter mess of her life by abandoning Alice.
"Uh, I guess so." Once again she gave Alice a sideways look and could make out Jules nuzzling her neck from the corner of her eye. "Listen, I gotta go. I’ll call you later."
Back at the table Alice couldn’t seem to stop herself from glancing over at Dana and Lara’s exchange, wondering what the hell had gotten into Dana all of a sudden. More so, she wondered if Harriet’s observation was correct. Could Dana really still be in love with her? Had she ever stopped? Since her appointment with the doctor yesterday, Alice had been running nearly every conversation she had had with Dana since the breakup on replay in her head. She tried to recall if Dana had ever said that she fell out of love with Alice, or if she realized she had never really been in love at all. But the memories seemed to elude her. This was possibly due to the fact that Alice had used just about all her strength and resolve to block out the memories of the breakup and the depressing months that followed. And after spending an entire afternoon and most of her night wondering if Harriet’s prediction had any substance to it, she couldn’t help but wonder why she even let herself get into this mess in the first place. Why was she trying to figure out if Dana still loved her based on what her shrink had observed? Why couldn’t Dana just tell her? Or if not, why couldn’t Alice just ask Dana herself? This was exactly what got her so infuriated with Dana’s inability to communicate in the first place, that the more Alice thought about it, the less she really wanted to know. Dana was a big girl, and if she couldn’t be honest about her feelings, Alice had no desire to push her on it. Besides, what good would it do her now? She was with Jules, and Dana with Lara. Alice had to take Harriet’s advice and just let the past be in the past, hopefully so that she could move on with her life and away from the all-consuming love she felt for Dana.
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )