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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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"Okay well, I should get going. Mike’s gonna have my ass if the speed of my serve isn’t up by at least 5 miles per hour by next week," Dana explained nervously as she got up and retreated away from the table. .
"Hey babe, I have your protein shake all ready for you." Lara grinned as Dana walked back up to the counter. She figured she’d try once again to give her girlfriend the benefit of the doubt and hope that whatever was plaguing her would work itself out. Basically, once again Lara decided to ignore the curious tension that had been developing between them whenever Alice was around.
"Uh, you know what Lar, can you just put it in a cup to go, I’m feeling kind of nauseous right now."
"Sure. Is everything’s okay?"
"Great."
"Dana, are you sure?"
Dana turned back to the table to find Jules telling a story to her friends and Alice staring up at her with admiration. She quickly turned back to the chef.
"God Lara, I said I was fine."
Dana saw her back away from her and immediately felt guilty for how unfair she was being. She could see the hurt in her eyes and it made her sick to think she put it there. Lara didn’t deserve this, and Dana couldn’t even trust herself to not take out her frustrations on her anymore. It was a shitty situation and she was getting increasingly tired of the guilt she felt for involving Lara in it.
"Ugh, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to snap like that. I’m just under all this pressure from Mike and the tournament coming up and—"
"Whatever you say, Dana."
"Listen, I probably just pushed myself too hard this morning. I’m gonna get out of here and go home and rest for a bit before I hit the courts. Thanks for the shake, I’ll see you later."
"Dana, wait."
"Huh?" she turned around and directed her attention back on the chef.
"Tonight, I know we were planning on doing dinner and a movie, but you think maybe we can skip the movie and just talk? We haven’t done that in awhile."
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )