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If I Fall: Chapter 16
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The singer sighed, knowing full well that she’d do just about anything Alice asked of her. "Hey, that works for me."
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Dana’s Condo
Lara had twice asked the same question, a rather terrifying question which had been plaguing her for as long as she could remember. And yet, Dana still stood before her with an unreadable expression, cloaked in complete silence.
"Dana, please don’t make this any harder than it is. I asked you a question and I hope you have enough respect for me to answer it honestly. Are you still in love with Alice?
She was finding it increasingly difficult to look the athlete in the eye every time she reiterated the question. It wasn’t the most difficult question to ask, but she knew that the answer, while she was quite sure what it would be, was one that she may not be ready to hear. Although when she glanced back into Dana’s eyes, she found it difficult to resist the overwhelming urge to retract the question and run over to the athlete and hold her.
Dana wore a look that was nondescript due to its sheer complexity. Lara’s best guess was that in Dana’s efforts to answer the question honestly, there existed a tortured inner struggle inside of her that proved she was having severe difficulty even admitting the answer to herself. Her face was clearly masked with pain, but it was a sort of pain, combined with vulnerability and defeat that made Dana’s features look so feeble and hopeless that even Lara had to feel bad. It was as if whatever Dana was feeling had swallowed her whole and taken complete control over her head and her heart. If Lara wasn’t the one getting hurt here, she would have felt terribly guilty for demanding that Dana admit what it was that she actually felt.
"Yes," Dana’s voice cracked as she exhaled the word in a barely audible tone. She nervously cleared her throat before finishing the thought. "I do. I…I’m in love with Alice."
Lara knew it would sting, but nothing prepared her for the wrenching in her gut as the words were released. "Did you ever stop loving her?"
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I guess Alice and Jules will be getting down with the get down. I’m truly digging this story to the nth. Yay!
Loved it! the break-up was very good..Lara is gone. Next one leaving? Jules (but is it bad that I like her?)I’m glad you liked my last comment, this story is really really great. PPS!!!
I loved Dana’s initial lack of a response when Lara asked if she was still in love with Alice. Thank you for ridding us of the Lara problem. I guess it has been long enough since season 3, so I’m capable of feeling somewhat sorry for her. I was also surprised that Dana was so blunt about Jules in the previous update. Happy writing!
it’s a first step that Dana and Lara broke-up, I mean who was she fooling? poor Lara though…now Dana has to come clean with Alice but I’m worried it’ll be too late :Sand lol can you make the tension thicker? damn! i can’t imagine it but i bet it’ll be a great chapter to read. keep the writing. have a nice week :)
Nice! Interested to see what Dana does, hopefully she puts it all out there, but at the appropriate time! Bring on the angts and sexual tension! PPS
I can’t wait to see how Dana is going to win Alice back
Cool. Loved the update. I am hoping Dana gets the nerve to win her back. PPS.
Great breakup. (now THAT sounds strange)I understand why dananalice wished Dana had initiated it- but it’s not surprising that Lara had too… and we already saw that emotionally Dana was there. The fact that still Lara had to pull it from her was emblematic. What did Alice say last chapter? “Don’t know why i thought you might save us the time and energy and just TELL me what your feeling?” :)I’m looking forward to Alice’s reaction to learning that Dana and Lara have broken up. Poor Alice, she’s toast. : )
lara had some great lines and words of wisdom in this installment. i am glad they broke up, but i kind of wish dana would have done it. but i think through the break up lara talked some sense in to her and dana realizes that she needs to grow up. as usual – great update. post soon and i look forward to some cute danish moments.
Sweet, I think I’m first! Loved it as I always do. I’m glad Lara finally put herself first. Hopefully Dana takes her advice. As for Alice and Jules…if you insist on having them do the horizontal bop, could you possibly have Jules yell out “Motherfucker!” at random intervals? Just a thought (it’d make my week). Anyway, great chapter, and I smell a Danish reconciliation on the way. I hope. Because all the suspense is making me nuts.
This is up the top of my list of fav danish fanfic, I do agree with other ppl that jules can’t be that perfect there has got to be something about her and I think Dana should try and find out more about her. Alice and Dana need to get together soon this is killing me I just want to bang there heads together!! Great fanfic PPS