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    If I Fall: Chapter 16

    Story written on March 25, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Dana and Lara are coming to an end, just as things are heating up with Alice and Jules.

     

    To this Dana could do nothing but shake her head slowly.

     

    "Do you wish you were still with her?"

     

    The answer was a clear yes, but right now it seemed like sparing Lara’s feelings was more important. The athlete opened her mouth to try her best to smooth things over somehow, or maybe even convince her that she’s happy where she is, but it was no use. She was tired of living a lie and couldn’t even bring herself to try and make Lara feel better. After standing there for a second with her mouth agape, she quickly closed it and looked away, hoping that that would convey the answer Lara was looking for.

     

    "I see. Okay. Well, I’d say those past twenty seconds have been the most honest twenty seconds of our entire relationship, don’t you think? Lara let out a self-deprecating laugh before turning away from Dana completely.

     

    "Lara, I’m so sorry." Dana moved closer to her, reaching out to touch her shoulder, but the other woman quickly took 2 steps away.

     

    "No. Don’t be sorry," she began while wiping away the tears, "I mean, you should be sorry about the way you handled this whole thing. And when you realized you made the wrong choice, I really wish you would have been honest with me right then and there. Telling me from the beginning that your heart still belonged to someone else could have saved us both a lot of grief and frustration, Dana. But you know what? I’m a big girl. I knew when we got involved that you still had unsettled feelings for Alice. And it’s clear as day that she still loves you too."

     

    "No, no. She has a girlfriend now." Dana wasn’t sure who she was trying to convince of that, but saying it out loud hurt more than just knowing it.

     

    "Yeah well, so did you."

     

    "Did?"

     

    Lara whirled around to face the athlete once more. "Oh, come on Dana. You really expect me to keep carrying on this charade? Especially now that I’m sure of how you feel?"

     

    "No, I just—"

     

    "Don’t worry Dana, you’ll survive on your own. You’re a big girl too," she scoffed and walked out of the kitchen towards the front door.

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    2. Loved it! the break-up was very good..Lara is gone. Next one leaving? Jules (but is it bad that I like her?)I’m glad you liked my last comment, this story is really really great. PPS!!!

    3. I loved Dana’s initial lack of a response when Lara asked if she was still in love with Alice. Thank you for ridding us of the Lara problem. I guess it has been long enough since season 3, so I’m capable of feeling somewhat sorry for her. I was also surprised that Dana was so blunt about Jules in the previous update. Happy writing!

    4. it’s a first step that Dana and Lara broke-up, I mean who was she fooling? poor Lara though…now Dana has to come clean with Alice but I’m worried it’ll be too late :Sand lol can you make the tension thicker? damn! i can’t imagine it but i bet it’ll be a great chapter to read. keep the writing. have a nice week :)

    5. Nice! Interested to see what Dana does, hopefully she puts it all out there, but at the appropriate time! Bring on the angts and sexual tension! PPS

    8. Great breakup. (now THAT sounds strange)I understand why dananalice wished Dana had initiated it- but it’s not surprising that Lara had too… and we already saw that emotionally Dana was there. The fact that still Lara had to pull it from her was emblematic. What did Alice say last chapter? “Don’t know why i thought you might save us the time and energy and just TELL me what your feeling?” :)I’m looking forward to Alice’s reaction to learning that Dana and Lara have broken up. Poor Alice, she’s toast. : )

    9. lara had some great lines and words of wisdom in this installment. i am glad they broke up, but i kind of wish dana would have done it. but i think through the break up lara talked some sense in to her and dana realizes that she needs to grow up. as usual – great update. post soon and i look forward to some cute danish moments.

    10. Sweet, I think I’m first! Loved it as I always do. I’m glad Lara finally put herself first. Hopefully Dana takes her advice. As for Alice and Jules…if you insist on having them do the horizontal bop, could you possibly have Jules yell out “Motherfucker!” at random intervals? Just a thought (it’d make my week). Anyway, great chapter, and I smell a Danish reconciliation on the way. I hope. Because all the suspense is making me nuts.

    11. This is up the top of my list of fav danish fanfic, I do agree with other ppl that jules can’t be that perfect there has got to be something about her and I think Dana should try and find out more about her. Alice and Dana need to get together soon this is killing me I just want to bang there heads together!! Great fanfic PPS

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