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    Love in Control – Chapter XVI – Who You With?

    She woke to the feel of gentle caresses up and down her side, and as soon as she opened her eyes, Tiler rolled over her with a sloppy, happy grin.

    Tiler dove for her neck immediately, making her giggle at first. As that nuzzling turned to wet licks and butterfly kisses, though, the fog of sleep lifted quickly. She’d expected, but hadn’t been completely ready for, that sweet-smelling Tiler scent that now enveloped her as Tiler settled over her and shut the world out with tender brushing of those thin, soft lips against her jaw, her neck, her ears, and all over her face, and the hard body she’d been lusting over pressing insistently against hers, generating pulse after pulse of a sluice of electricity that rushed through her veins.

    She swallowed a moan. This is what I’m talking ‘bout.

    She expected Tiler to touch her all over next, and braced for it. But something else happened. Her experiences in the past led her to connect muscles with a certain toughness in her lover’s skin, and accepted that swagger meant dominance and confidence between the sheets, fully expecting Tiler to take what she wanted from her lover.  That’s what all those women probably went crazy over, too, right? Tiler now, though…

    What she hadn’t expected or been prepared for was encountering silky soft skin everywhere she touched, wrapped over muscles that rippled and bunched ‘neath her touch, as her hands went exploring. And instead of taking liberties with Jia, Tiler kept her hands busy running her hands through JIa’s air, massaging her head lightly even as she let Jia know with her body language that she was letting the blonde take them to the next level, that the blonde could do what she wanted. She allowed Jia access to every place that her curious, hungry hands wanted to roam, lifting slightly to allow Jia to unbutton the top buttons of her dress shirt so that Jia could touch her, whimpering when Jia popped the button of her white jeans.

    And, well, everything Jia touched on that unbelievably sexy body—the thewy flare of back muscles, her surprisingly well-shaped breasts, the achingly hard biceps that bunched on feeling her touch — stunned Jia.    But it was vulnerable Tiler, the Tiler who was apparently all smoothness and whimpers when she let someone touch her without reservation, revealing the woman inside even as she hinted at exposed vulnerabilities, who could seemingly react the same as any other woman would with a lover she trusted, that made Jia’s heart hammer erratically with an unfamiliar beat.

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    1. The book is ending soon, and that was the lead-in or appetizer for the next chapter, which will s-s-s-sizzle! Am debating whether I wrap the book up then or break the ending into two chapters. What say you? If I end it in one, the last chapter will make for a longer read.

      Btw: I was advised recently that maybe I should consider writing in other places. I tend to write what I would read, and I look for rhythm, style, flow, voice, nuance, etc. in what I read so aspire to that when I write. These may not be the same things others here look for when they read, hence the advice. Since it takes some work and time to write, in the first place, (time I don’t have much of), maybe the advice-giver is right: it may we’ll be true that my idiosyncratic approach is not a good fit for readers here. Which is fine, btw.

      Meanwhile, thanks for the comments @ssgogo93 and @Bibi28 ! I hope you’ll like how the book ends.

      • Long reads never bother me, it just means more wine.

        This site has a rich history of writers of all styles and skill levels. Your particular style is unique, polished, creative, and very entertaining. I’m assuming this is the first and only site you post your stories. The FanFiction lane is an excellent entree into the world of writing, as it has a built-in audience eager for more creative stories that revolve around their favorite characters. You’ve evolved well beyond that. You’ve created your own world of interesting characters, each very colorful, distinctive, and lovable. You’re very talented and you obviously have many stories to tell. While I’d hate to see you go, you should definitely continue writing and perhaps explore different forums to share your work. Whatever you decide, please don’t forget your peeps here and let us know where we can find more @Skydancer musings.

      • Sky dancer!
        Please continue with Bette and Tina’s storey and a little insight as to what happened to the gold and their lives together. Arron and Harley need to become the love of each other again!
        I’m a. Believer!

          • Hi S.
            Completely ecstatic that you replied, in fact I was so thrilled with the love and affection these two women have for each other I have continued with poems as well as lyrics to songs once again. I’ve always had an amorous nature and I have been blessed with a wonderful women who appreciates the romantic side of me.
            B & T need more children to love on. I am depending on your good sense and writing talent to make their futures long and productive!
            In Florida now but will get back to the snow and cold of Toronto soon.
            Stay well my friend,

    2. You may end this story in short form or long. Up, down, or sideways. Just as long as it makes you comfortable. If you are comfortable, we get more creative imagination. More imagination the better the read, and with your talent you would entertain the idea of moving on. We will certainly miss you here. Your material is so very appropriate here, This site was always good for bigger discussions and better arguments about all things L word. And when no one could decide what the production staff writers were thinking some one else would write a better edition and appease the masses. If you leave here please remember you will always have a fan club!

      • Hello,
        Thanks for your comment! I’m thinking of writing differently, after this one concludes. Not so public; more intimate; and delivered specifically for a reader or small group of readers. Like a handcrafted cocktail, done omikase-style, by a bartender whose style you like. The drink takes some time to craft, has many layers of taste and flavor, but you wait patiently for your bartender to fix your drink because you know that she has time to do only a few such cocktails in the bar you’re in, then she’s off to do other bars. You’ll have to tell her if you like the drink, of course.

        Let me know if you want to be one of them (one of the readers, I mean. Although I fully support drinking a cocktail, a handcrafted, well-prepared one, while you read. And only if you don’t drive after, of course!)

        ‘Til then, take care!

        S

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