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Love in Control – Chapter XVI – Who You With?
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“Jia?” Tiler asked softly as she raised her head up, surprised at the loud moan that accompanied the blonde pressing closer to her all of a sudden. She paused from brushing her lips against the neck that she’d been nuzzling, in a more intimate way than she’d been doing when they’d danced earlier. Then as now, Jia’s perfume, and the feel of the soft skin on that neck, had been driving Tiler crazy. But it was all that touching, caressing and rubbing by her soft hands all over her body that had Tiler thinking hard – oh, Jia!
“I’m dripping.” The words escaped Jia’s mouth before she could stop them. Shit!
“I’m dripping like an anxious teenager. I feel like a virgin right now.” Once those words started tumbling out, it seems, her mouth couldn’t be contained. Not with Tiler. From the time they’d had that amazing dinner, and shared things about themselves, they’d promised each other complete honesty – an easy thing to do, as far as Jia was concerned. She knew already that she’d be unable to refuse Tiler anything.
She shut her eyes in embarrassment. After a minute of easy silence, she reluctantly opened her eyes when she felt Tiler brush her fingers lightly over her shut eyelids. And then Tiler lifted herself up further, to rest on her elbows and forearms anchored on either side of Jia’s head.
“I feel like I should say something.” A sardonic smile and twinkly deep blue eyes teased her. “Dripping, huh? Such a loaded word. Especially since I haven’t touched you in that special place, yet. And “virgin.” Wow. I don’t understand – where’s this coming from? You’re the one who’s been one touching me all over. Not the way any virgin I’ve known. But I love it, so don’t ever stop please …”
Tiler rolled off of Jia, and lay on her side, one arm crooked in a triangle, palm supporting her head. She was still smirking as she let an arm rest comfortably over Jia’s stomach. Jia found it difficult to swallow as she felt the heat of Tiler’s arm through her dress. Tiler’s scent hung in the air and her nose eagerly searched for it.
“H-h-how d-d-did y-you make me …erm.. wet without having kissed me properly, yet?” Jia remained on her back and shook her head helplessly, smiling also even as her eyes roamed the ceiling. Her voice was throaty, and made her natural alto sound husky. She didn’t sound like herself at all. “Is-is this how all your women reacted to you?”
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Dear Lord, woman. You just get better and better. That was the definition of sexy.
Yes, i agree , sexy, very sexy!
Alice, one loud and weird girl. She never was my favourite character. Kick her out of the car and let her get lost.
Thanks for the update!
The book is ending soon, and that was the lead-in or appetizer for the next chapter, which will s-s-s-sizzle! Am debating whether I wrap the book up then or break the ending into two chapters. What say you? If I end it in one, the last chapter will make for a longer read.
Btw: I was advised recently that maybe I should consider writing in other places. I tend to write what I would read, and I look for rhythm, style, flow, voice, nuance, etc. in what I read so aspire to that when I write. These may not be the same things others here look for when they read, hence the advice. Since it takes some work and time to write, in the first place, (time I don’t have much of), maybe the advice-giver is right: it may we’ll be true that my idiosyncratic approach is not a good fit for readers here. Which is fine, btw.
Meanwhile, thanks for the comments @ssgogo93 and @Bibi28 ! I hope you’ll like how the book ends.
Long reads never bother me, it just means more wine.
This site has a rich history of writers of all styles and skill levels. Your particular style is unique, polished, creative, and very entertaining. I’m assuming this is the first and only site you post your stories. The FanFiction lane is an excellent entree into the world of writing, as it has a built-in audience eager for more creative stories that revolve around their favorite characters. You’ve evolved well beyond that. You’ve created your own world of interesting characters, each very colorful, distinctive, and lovable. You’re very talented and you obviously have many stories to tell. While I’d hate to see you go, you should definitely continue writing and perhaps explore different forums to share your work. Whatever you decide, please don’t forget your peeps here and let us know where we can find more @Skydancer musings.
Sky dancer!
Please continue with Bette and Tina’s storey and a little insight as to what happened to the gold and their lives together. Arron and Harley need to become the love of each other again!
I’m a. Believer!
I see you Tibetter001! Thanks for believing :-)
The gold story; Aerin and Harley — they’re coming back soon.
Will give you a head’s up when,
Keep warm til then,
S
Hi S.
Completely ecstatic that you replied, in fact I was so thrilled with the love and affection these two women have for each other I have continued with poems as well as lyrics to songs once again. I’ve always had an amorous nature and I have been blessed with a wonderful women who appreciates the romantic side of me.
B & T need more children to love on. I am depending on your good sense and writing talent to make their futures long and productive!
In Florida now but will get back to the snow and cold of Toronto soon.
Stay well my friend,
You may end this story in short form or long. Up, down, or sideways. Just as long as it makes you comfortable. If you are comfortable, we get more creative imagination. More imagination the better the read, and with your talent you would entertain the idea of moving on. We will certainly miss you here. Your material is so very appropriate here, This site was always good for bigger discussions and better arguments about all things L word. And when no one could decide what the production staff writers were thinking some one else would write a better edition and appease the masses. If you leave here please remember you will always have a fan club!
Hello,
Thanks for your comment! I’m thinking of writing differently, after this one concludes. Not so public; more intimate; and delivered specifically for a reader or small group of readers. Like a handcrafted cocktail, done omikase-style, by a bartender whose style you like. The drink takes some time to craft, has many layers of taste and flavor, but you wait patiently for your bartender to fix your drink because you know that she has time to do only a few such cocktails in the bar you’re in, then she’s off to do other bars. You’ll have to tell her if you like the drink, of course.
Let me know if you want to be one of them (one of the readers, I mean. Although I fully support drinking a cocktail, a handcrafted, well-prepared one, while you read. And only if you don’t drive after, of course!)
‘Til then, take care!
S
Intriguing, carry on