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Love in Control – Chapter XVI – Who You With?
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Yeah, cool and sexy Tiler had a swagger and masculinity that had drawn Jia in like a hapless moth to a flame, and she’d expected to be bowled over by it when they’d finally give in to each other, but it was soft, vulnerable Tiler’s that left her gobsmacked. It hinted and teased of untold combinations and mysteries to be explored. Yes, Tiler, is indeed, not a man. She’s handsome, moves like a dream, built and sexy beyond all get out , and that’s the swag side that everybody sees and crushes on. But the half of her nobody sees, this vulnerable woman between the sheets, deep and mysterious, waiting to be ravaged and loved by her lover, was, well … just like me! Only hotter.
This was a revelation that hit Jia with an intensity she’d never experienced before with past female partners. What does this mean? And does she like what I like? Does she like her breasts played with? Does she like it fast or slow? Does she like her clit sucked or rubbed? Do her walls tighten and ripple when an orgasm rips through her? Will she cum the way I would if I …. all sorts of tangled, chaotic, erotic thoughts set Jia’s mind off like a rocket. The prospects of a universe of possibilities drenched with hot sex with Tiler that waited to be discovered had Jia reeling. And then she felt another brush of those naturally cherry-red soft lips ghost up and down her neck.
“Unnnnhhh!” Bolts of raw desire blasted long-dormant brain cells devoted to ecstasy awake and sent them soaring. They slammed into her pussy with a suddenness that stopped her breath. Wake Up! She arched off of the bed, suddenly dripping wet between her nether lips, leaking into her thighs. Jeez!
Sex had never been this mental before; her mind had never been this engaged or involved. For Jia, sex had never been about what was going on between her ears. Rather, it had mostly been about physical groping with her male or female partner that usually ended with someone climaxing, after about ten minutes. That was fine, as experiences went. She didn’t expect fireworks, and felt lucky when a sparkler went off inside. But f&^%$ck me, this thing with Tiler is surprisingly, deliciously, mainly, mental right now, that it makes me shudder to think how it would feel when she actually touches … and then enters me. Or when I enter her.
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Dear Lord, woman. You just get better and better. That was the definition of sexy.
Yes, i agree , sexy, very sexy!
Alice, one loud and weird girl. She never was my favourite character. Kick her out of the car and let her get lost.
Thanks for the update!
The book is ending soon, and that was the lead-in or appetizer for the next chapter, which will s-s-s-sizzle! Am debating whether I wrap the book up then or break the ending into two chapters. What say you? If I end it in one, the last chapter will make for a longer read.
Btw: I was advised recently that maybe I should consider writing in other places. I tend to write what I would read, and I look for rhythm, style, flow, voice, nuance, etc. in what I read so aspire to that when I write. These may not be the same things others here look for when they read, hence the advice. Since it takes some work and time to write, in the first place, (time I don’t have much of), maybe the advice-giver is right: it may we’ll be true that my idiosyncratic approach is not a good fit for readers here. Which is fine, btw.
Meanwhile, thanks for the comments @ssgogo93 and @Bibi28 ! I hope you’ll like how the book ends.
Long reads never bother me, it just means more wine.
This site has a rich history of writers of all styles and skill levels. Your particular style is unique, polished, creative, and very entertaining. I’m assuming this is the first and only site you post your stories. The FanFiction lane is an excellent entree into the world of writing, as it has a built-in audience eager for more creative stories that revolve around their favorite characters. You’ve evolved well beyond that. You’ve created your own world of interesting characters, each very colorful, distinctive, and lovable. You’re very talented and you obviously have many stories to tell. While I’d hate to see you go, you should definitely continue writing and perhaps explore different forums to share your work. Whatever you decide, please don’t forget your peeps here and let us know where we can find more @Skydancer musings.
Sky dancer!
Please continue with Bette and Tina’s storey and a little insight as to what happened to the gold and their lives together. Arron and Harley need to become the love of each other again!
I’m a. Believer!
I see you Tibetter001! Thanks for believing :-)
The gold story; Aerin and Harley — they’re coming back soon.
Will give you a head’s up when,
Keep warm til then,
S
Hi S.
Completely ecstatic that you replied, in fact I was so thrilled with the love and affection these two women have for each other I have continued with poems as well as lyrics to songs once again. I’ve always had an amorous nature and I have been blessed with a wonderful women who appreciates the romantic side of me.
B & T need more children to love on. I am depending on your good sense and writing talent to make their futures long and productive!
In Florida now but will get back to the snow and cold of Toronto soon.
Stay well my friend,
You may end this story in short form or long. Up, down, or sideways. Just as long as it makes you comfortable. If you are comfortable, we get more creative imagination. More imagination the better the read, and with your talent you would entertain the idea of moving on. We will certainly miss you here. Your material is so very appropriate here, This site was always good for bigger discussions and better arguments about all things L word. And when no one could decide what the production staff writers were thinking some one else would write a better edition and appease the masses. If you leave here please remember you will always have a fan club!
Hello,
Thanks for your comment! I’m thinking of writing differently, after this one concludes. Not so public; more intimate; and delivered specifically for a reader or small group of readers. Like a handcrafted cocktail, done omikase-style, by a bartender whose style you like. The drink takes some time to craft, has many layers of taste and flavor, but you wait patiently for your bartender to fix your drink because you know that she has time to do only a few such cocktails in the bar you’re in, then she’s off to do other bars. You’ll have to tell her if you like the drink, of course.
Let me know if you want to be one of them (one of the readers, I mean. Although I fully support drinking a cocktail, a handcrafted, well-prepared one, while you read. And only if you don’t drive after, of course!)
‘Til then, take care!
S
Intriguing, carry on