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Love in Control – Chapter XVI – Who You With?
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Jia still had her mouth open, in mid thought, when Tiler’s own husky voice interrupt her musings. “Should I kiss you like I would a virgin, then?”
The moment crackled with meaning and electricity. She slid a sideways glance at her … girlfriend?
“Kissed many virgins, have you?”
Shrug. “Done my share.”
“More than your share, I’d bet. And I’m pretty sure they wouldn’t have stayed virgins for long around you.”
They smiled at each other. Tiler knew Jia was nervous, and was stalling. She traced patterns over Jia’s stomach, fingertip-light brushes of heat over the silk and satin and gossamer of Jia’s dress. She smiled at the audible catch of breath. “I’m sorry I fell asleep on you, Jia. I don’t know what came over me. All I can remember is holding you in my arms, about to kiss you, and then I saw a bed, and then my brain sent this sleep signal out that overrode everything I was feeling. Next thing I knew, I’d fallen on the bed, dragging you with me …”
Jia laughed lightly. “It caught me off-guard, yeah. But you were tired, baby.”
Jia caressed the forearm over her body, biting her lip as those fingers continued to trace patterns over her dress, stoking the embers of a doused fire to life.
“How long was I out?”
“About an hour, hour and a half.”
Without warning, as she tried to say other things, to try to put into words what her mind had problems processing, Tiler rolled over her again. “So where was I an hour and a half ago? About to kiss you, right? For the very first time?”
It’s happening. OMG, it’s happening.
Tiler dipped her head, and started to kiss Jia’s hair, spread luxuriantly like a fan over the pillow, then ran her lips over Jia’s forehead, “You can still stop this, if you want to change your mind, Jia,” Tiler murmured as she skimmed over Jia’s warming face, the soft cheeks, fluttering eyelids as they nervously closed, and then gently laid a kiss on the pert nose, shifted to Jia’s ears, nibbled soft earlobes, and whispered “even your ears are sexy, Jia,” then tarried a while on each one before shifting for leverage so that she could goose that long, elegant neck with butterfly kisses. “You spritz cologne here? For me to track, like a helpless lover, baby?” Jia practically lifted off of the bed with a low, begging moan.
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Dear Lord, woman. You just get better and better. That was the definition of sexy.
Yes, i agree , sexy, very sexy!
Alice, one loud and weird girl. She never was my favourite character. Kick her out of the car and let her get lost.
Thanks for the update!
The book is ending soon, and that was the lead-in or appetizer for the next chapter, which will s-s-s-sizzle! Am debating whether I wrap the book up then or break the ending into two chapters. What say you? If I end it in one, the last chapter will make for a longer read.
Btw: I was advised recently that maybe I should consider writing in other places. I tend to write what I would read, and I look for rhythm, style, flow, voice, nuance, etc. in what I read so aspire to that when I write. These may not be the same things others here look for when they read, hence the advice. Since it takes some work and time to write, in the first place, (time I don’t have much of), maybe the advice-giver is right: it may we’ll be true that my idiosyncratic approach is not a good fit for readers here. Which is fine, btw.
Meanwhile, thanks for the comments @ssgogo93 and @Bibi28 ! I hope you’ll like how the book ends.
Long reads never bother me, it just means more wine.
This site has a rich history of writers of all styles and skill levels. Your particular style is unique, polished, creative, and very entertaining. I’m assuming this is the first and only site you post your stories. The FanFiction lane is an excellent entree into the world of writing, as it has a built-in audience eager for more creative stories that revolve around their favorite characters. You’ve evolved well beyond that. You’ve created your own world of interesting characters, each very colorful, distinctive, and lovable. You’re very talented and you obviously have many stories to tell. While I’d hate to see you go, you should definitely continue writing and perhaps explore different forums to share your work. Whatever you decide, please don’t forget your peeps here and let us know where we can find more @Skydancer musings.
Sky dancer!
Please continue with Bette and Tina’s storey and a little insight as to what happened to the gold and their lives together. Arron and Harley need to become the love of each other again!
I’m a. Believer!
I see you Tibetter001! Thanks for believing :-)
The gold story; Aerin and Harley — they’re coming back soon.
Will give you a head’s up when,
Keep warm til then,
S
Hi S.
Completely ecstatic that you replied, in fact I was so thrilled with the love and affection these two women have for each other I have continued with poems as well as lyrics to songs once again. I’ve always had an amorous nature and I have been blessed with a wonderful women who appreciates the romantic side of me.
B & T need more children to love on. I am depending on your good sense and writing talent to make their futures long and productive!
In Florida now but will get back to the snow and cold of Toronto soon.
Stay well my friend,
You may end this story in short form or long. Up, down, or sideways. Just as long as it makes you comfortable. If you are comfortable, we get more creative imagination. More imagination the better the read, and with your talent you would entertain the idea of moving on. We will certainly miss you here. Your material is so very appropriate here, This site was always good for bigger discussions and better arguments about all things L word. And when no one could decide what the production staff writers were thinking some one else would write a better edition and appease the masses. If you leave here please remember you will always have a fan club!
Hello,
Thanks for your comment! I’m thinking of writing differently, after this one concludes. Not so public; more intimate; and delivered specifically for a reader or small group of readers. Like a handcrafted cocktail, done omikase-style, by a bartender whose style you like. The drink takes some time to craft, has many layers of taste and flavor, but you wait patiently for your bartender to fix your drink because you know that she has time to do only a few such cocktails in the bar you’re in, then she’s off to do other bars. You’ll have to tell her if you like the drink, of course.
Let me know if you want to be one of them (one of the readers, I mean. Although I fully support drinking a cocktail, a handcrafted, well-prepared one, while you read. And only if you don’t drive after, of course!)
‘Til then, take care!
S
Intriguing, carry on