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Love in Control – Chapter XVI – Who You With?
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Tiler tore her lips from Jia’s hot kiss again. But I want more, now. Much, much, much more. Her throat was dry and her mind was fogged with lust, but she knew they had to stop, before….before she tore that beautiful dress off of her. “I really want you naked right now, Jia …”
The answering moan almost did her in.
“But I want to wake up next to you in the morning in your bed or in my bed. And, let’s face it, the morning after that, in a place that belongs to you or me. Not here.”
Jia pulled on her neck to urgently to cover that delectable mouth with hers, to grab another taste of those sexy, delicious lips. Then she released from the kiss just as suddenly. “My place, then. It’s closer.”
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Shane was the first to chance upon the two. Alice alighted from the elevator, evidently surprised at seeing Lara waiting, and whose arms were filled with assorted platters, empty now of the food that the redhead brought with her to the impromptu party. Ping! Ping! The elevator bell sounded insistently as Alice kept the door open with a leg and arm.
Crackling and thick, the tension between them wound its dark way down the hall.
Shit.
“Well, cheffie, looks like it’s just you and me now. No Bette to hide behind…”
“Who says I was hiding?” Lara leaned a shoulder against the wall, for support, shooting a baleful glance at the dirty blonde and started toward the elevator. Her arms were growing weary from the imbalanced weight of what she’d been carrying, and she was also struggling with the bagful of kitchen tools jammed into the backpack that hung uncertainly on the edge of a shoulder.
Plus Alice was really getting tiresome, with all this jealousy about hers and Dana’s finished relationship.
“By the way, if you’re looking for Dana, she’s downstairs, waiting for me around the corner …”
It drew the desired reaction.
“She’s WH-AA-AT?!! Alice jumped back into the elevators, and faced the control panel to punch the glowing circular light for the lobby floor. She ignored Lara’s request, “Hold the doors, please.”
The redhead had been heading for the elevators, when she felt a whoosh of air as Shane sprinted past to hold the elevators open.
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Dear Lord, woman. You just get better and better. That was the definition of sexy.
Yes, i agree , sexy, very sexy!
Alice, one loud and weird girl. She never was my favourite character. Kick her out of the car and let her get lost.
Thanks for the update!
The book is ending soon, and that was the lead-in or appetizer for the next chapter, which will s-s-s-sizzle! Am debating whether I wrap the book up then or break the ending into two chapters. What say you? If I end it in one, the last chapter will make for a longer read.
Btw: I was advised recently that maybe I should consider writing in other places. I tend to write what I would read, and I look for rhythm, style, flow, voice, nuance, etc. in what I read so aspire to that when I write. These may not be the same things others here look for when they read, hence the advice. Since it takes some work and time to write, in the first place, (time I don’t have much of), maybe the advice-giver is right: it may we’ll be true that my idiosyncratic approach is not a good fit for readers here. Which is fine, btw.
Meanwhile, thanks for the comments @ssgogo93 and @Bibi28 ! I hope you’ll like how the book ends.
Long reads never bother me, it just means more wine.
This site has a rich history of writers of all styles and skill levels. Your particular style is unique, polished, creative, and very entertaining. I’m assuming this is the first and only site you post your stories. The FanFiction lane is an excellent entree into the world of writing, as it has a built-in audience eager for more creative stories that revolve around their favorite characters. You’ve evolved well beyond that. You’ve created your own world of interesting characters, each very colorful, distinctive, and lovable. You’re very talented and you obviously have many stories to tell. While I’d hate to see you go, you should definitely continue writing and perhaps explore different forums to share your work. Whatever you decide, please don’t forget your peeps here and let us know where we can find more @Skydancer musings.
Sky dancer!
Please continue with Bette and Tina’s storey and a little insight as to what happened to the gold and their lives together. Arron and Harley need to become the love of each other again!
I’m a. Believer!
I see you Tibetter001! Thanks for believing :-)
The gold story; Aerin and Harley — they’re coming back soon.
Will give you a head’s up when,
Keep warm til then,
S
Hi S.
Completely ecstatic that you replied, in fact I was so thrilled with the love and affection these two women have for each other I have continued with poems as well as lyrics to songs once again. I’ve always had an amorous nature and I have been blessed with a wonderful women who appreciates the romantic side of me.
B & T need more children to love on. I am depending on your good sense and writing talent to make their futures long and productive!
In Florida now but will get back to the snow and cold of Toronto soon.
Stay well my friend,
You may end this story in short form or long. Up, down, or sideways. Just as long as it makes you comfortable. If you are comfortable, we get more creative imagination. More imagination the better the read, and with your talent you would entertain the idea of moving on. We will certainly miss you here. Your material is so very appropriate here, This site was always good for bigger discussions and better arguments about all things L word. And when no one could decide what the production staff writers were thinking some one else would write a better edition and appease the masses. If you leave here please remember you will always have a fan club!
Hello,
Thanks for your comment! I’m thinking of writing differently, after this one concludes. Not so public; more intimate; and delivered specifically for a reader or small group of readers. Like a handcrafted cocktail, done omikase-style, by a bartender whose style you like. The drink takes some time to craft, has many layers of taste and flavor, but you wait patiently for your bartender to fix your drink because you know that she has time to do only a few such cocktails in the bar you’re in, then she’s off to do other bars. You’ll have to tell her if you like the drink, of course.
Let me know if you want to be one of them (one of the readers, I mean. Although I fully support drinking a cocktail, a handcrafted, well-prepared one, while you read. And only if you don’t drive after, of course!)
‘Til then, take care!
S
Intriguing, carry on