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Luau (Chapter 4) -FINALE-
“Any more questions?”
It was hard to tell if the steam in the bathroom was from the hot water or the hotter sex. They’d barely made it inside before Dana pushed Alice into the wall. Al grunted as the cool tiles pressed against her nipples, while Dana toyed with the spot on the back of her neck. Dana had dreamed of doing this very thing on the plane from Seattle this morning. That knowledge somehow made it even more exciting for her as she worked her way down Al’s back, smiling to herself as Alice adjusted her stance, pushing her ass back, giving her better access. Alice groaned her excitement as Dana ate her from behind, lavishing attention on her inner lips before reaching around and parting her wide and lapping at her distended clit. In her deprived state, that’s all it took. Alice rode Dana’s tongue, her hips moving rapidly as she unknowingly chanted her own color commentary.
“Dane! Baby! Right there…that’s it. That’s it.”
The urgency in Alice’s voice drove Dana on, heightening her own excitement.
“Fuck. Don’t stop baby. Don’t…stop. I’m so close. Uh huh. Mmmmmm. Fuck, that’s so good. So good.”
Dana managed to work her own center with fervor, driving herself to the same state. Unable to contain herself, Dana’s moans reverberated through Al’s supersensitive core.
“Ohhhh. God. Mmmmm…Dane. I love you!” Alice stopped talking as she stopped breathing, eyes rolled back, suspended in a silent scream of pleasure as Dana pushed two fingers into her.
“I love you too baby.” Dana’s voice was husky as Alice sank slowly into her waiting arms. “I dream about you whenever we’re apart.”
Though most of their friends had already been to the house several times, Dana insisted on giving them the grand tour, explaining that it hadn’t been fully finished, even at Bette and Tina’s wedding two months earlier. She was so proud of everything Alice had accomplished…the restoration, remodel and decorating…that she just couldn’t help herself and their friends happily obliged. In fact, Al had accomplished something amazing, discovering an aptitude that she’d never imagined. Her talent and attention to detail was evident in everything from the carefully chosen lighting fixtures to the saucy little throw pillows in the den.
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Great ending to a lovely story. Can’t wait for your next chapter in the lives of our Danish pair.
A fantastic finale. Thank you for your beautiful post. I absolutely adore Danish and thanks to writers like you who never seize to amaze me your creativity and writing styles. As long as you write, I will comment. Yes, I read almost all the Danish fanfics within 4 months started in late March. I am so very grateful to you all undying dedicated Danish writers. Thanks again SammysGirl from the bottom of my heart. I too am looking forward to your next creation.
this was just the perfect ending…and the writing of it was amazing. i hope this isn’t the last of your danish writing.
hello my friend! Just read through your latest….and loved it! it’s been awhile…hope all is going great for you! as you might suspect, I was a sucker for Helena’s sweetness on Lara!
That was AWESOME ending!!! I cracked up at AL and Dane catching Bette and Tina in the bathroom (flippin funny). Loved the wedding,great writing!!!!! I cant wait untill the next story,PPVS P.S You are amazing at writing Sammy!!! Thank you too. :)~
…to a long and happy life together.” You too ;-) Very sweet.
Great story. I love it. I wish they actually had a long happy life together.
oh man fantastic!!!!! i loved it all so beautiful i don’t want it to end:( did i read somewhere that lucky in love will be back soon oh i hope so so very much if not you have done so well i’ve enjoyed everything you’ve written!!! :)
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks a million for his wonderful story! I’ve enjoyed reading where it went from chapter to chapter. Kissing before they were pronounced married made me laugh :) This is great! thanks again. You’re awesome! I hope this will not be the end of your Danish stories.
hiya,sorry, I think I forgot to comment on your last update on this! So I’m doing it together with this one. Wonderful story and wonderful ending! Amazingly good captured and sweet.Can’t wait for your next ones.
YAY!!! I Love THEM!!!! I Love Dave Too!!Great Story!!! Looking fwd to your next story! Keep Up The Great Work!!!
Woo Hoo! I was beyond excited to see your post. I love your writing and your stories. I am really looking forward to the sequel. You write all the characters so well and really amazing Danish. Loved Alice and Dana catching Bette and Tina — it usually seems to be the other way around. And the vows were beautiful. Great. Great. Great. Thank you so much for the story!