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Bette didn’t reply – it was nice just sitting on the sofa with the house not full of noise. She missed silence sometimes.
“Have you heard from Roger?”
“A text- same as last night –Kit is ill – caused by what she has been drinking and inhaling”
“Do you want to go over and see her?”
Bette opened her eyes and looked at Tina
“No –I don’t see the point. It would hardly give her a tonic would it “
Tina felt that she was being gently closed down.
“Do you want dinner?”
“Not yet – thank you though – for making my dinner “
“You don’t know what it is – you haven’t asked “
Bette looked at Tina and saw the frustration
“Would you like to send me to my room to tidy it up?” Bette asked lightly.
“Would it put you in a better mood?” Tina retaliated
“It might make you feel better “
“I would feel better if you talked to me and didn’t close me out – you are still mad at me for yesterday”
“I am not mad at you – I am lost as to why I was upset and we did both contribute to yesterday being a shitty day”
“We need to talk “Tina said
Bette nodded “I know – I just “
“You are tired, you are hungry and you don’t want a fight “Tina summarised
“You read me really well “
“We are getting married next Friday “
Bette smiled “You don’t want to call it off do you ?”
“No – I love you and just because yesterday was bad doesn’t mean I want out. In the history of bad days, we have had – yesterday wasn’t even bad enough to get into the top 100 bad days “
Tina got up and joined Bette on the sofa. She took hold of her hand and kissed it
“I love you – we have bad days – of course we do – we are human and with everything that is going on – it would be a miracle if we weren’t hitting the odd obstacle on the way”
“I am sorry I shut you down last night “
“I am sorry I came onto you when Angie could have walked in on us any minute. You were right and I was steamed on cocktails”
“We both made mistakes – let’s put it to bed eh “
Tina lent forward and kissed Bette on the lips – she deepened the kiss – her future wife tasted so good and she still wanted the brunette. When the kiss ended Bette touched Tina’s face
“I love you too “
“I know – and we have so much going on its hard for both of us “
Bette nodded “What is for dinner?” she asked after a few minutes of comfortable silence
“Roast dinner “
“Oh – oh now I am hungry “
“Okay – I will tell you what – you go and see if the Prisoner of Azkaban wants some ice cream and we can all sit around”
Bette smiled “That’s a good idea “she kissed Tina again “And when she is asleep we do need to talk – the old Bette and Tina were the ones who struggled to communicate – we are not like that “
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I am very happy to see taken up this story. Thank You allyemmerson. Please, do not also forget The L Wings (not for ending but for more and more chapters :)) ), one of the best fanfics all time :)
Nice…very nice, Ally! Thank you!
Oh no, you didn’t just ended this amazing story! :-(
what a beautiful journey you took them and us and i am sad it ended. Is there a chance you are gonna give us a sequel? There are so more things to tell.
Good job to ban Alice and Jenny immediately when Bette became the owner of the Planet.
Ally Emmerson, i want to thank you for sharing your talent as writer and i hope you will come back with more incredible stories and maybe finish your other stories like the L Wing.
The End ! Really ???????? Just when I was thinking about how many pages you used to give us on the L-Wing….and enjoying the 23 today… Maybe the planets are right – the alignment…the new Moon… New beginnings and ends……”proof of miracles and of the truly amazing human spirit ”
Thanks AllyEm, for everything.
(Nicholas is a *wink wink* good name for a cat brought into the home at Xmas! :)
The end???? Oh its sad,but Thank you for año.
Thank you so much for hours of enjoyment reading this story as well as the other wonderful stories. I hope your writing block is long gone and you continue to write such marvelous stories of Bette and Tina. Loved it, thanks
I greatly concur with your sentiments. Just need to add how much I adored Angelica. Ally you are such an amazing artist, I say this because your words always paints a picture for me. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Sorry to see this story end but thank you for coming back to complete it. I would certainly welcome a sequel..
I check back daily looking for the continuation of The L Wing. Hopefully soon.
Thanks for all your stories.
Thank you so much for this and your other great stories.
So happy to have had the wonderful 23 pages to read but so sad that it’s ‘The End’.
Perhaps an Epilogue?
Perhaps a Sequel?
Perhaps more L Wing?
Perhaps just, at the risk of sounding like Oliver Twist, more?
Sincerely Thanks Absolutely Loved it :)
Thank you for finishing this part of the story. Seems as if the story could handle a sequel if you’re so inclined. I was reading “Running on Sunshine” and it is quite excellent. Maybe write more for that story?
Thanks! Sorry to see it end but I know you will come back with a sequel. PPS
My God! my heart was just in pieces. my favorite story ends …: – ((((
I loved every minute of it and I thank you, Ally that you wrote this fabulous story.
can we expect an epilogue?
the last sentence was heaven for me, every story should have this, (they only deserve it).
Wow, I thought Bette would do something like that.
Thank you Allyemmerson!
What a great way to start the new year with the
conclusion of NEW YORK MINUTE.
I love your stories.
Would it be possible to repost IS THIS LOVE?
I can’t find it on this site, and it is my all time
favorite story.
Thanks again.
binglebug
This story will leave longing.
Sad that comes to an end.
I raise my glass of wine and I’m doing a
big greeting to you, thank you for giving us
a fascinating story, engaging, a beautiful story! and
Best of all, you complete this story, a
great toast to you. !!
The whole constellation of the universe.
I await your return.
I was fearful when I saw 23 pages that this was the end. Your stories have delighted and entertained me for years. I , like many would love to read a sequel but am happy with what we have had the great pleasure to read.
There are two more stories I would love to see. I will continue to look daily for anything you write. Happy new year.
Thanks Ally!! Appreciate this so much! Thanks for spare time writing and share with us! Hope you and Rocky are doing fine! :) looking forward to your next installment whenever you are ready ;-)
It has taken me several days to read this book and its many chapters. I want to say that I love your Bette and Tina. I am thrilled to read a story in which these two women mature in their relationship and in their lives. I love how you have them teach each other how to communicate and how essential it is for their relationship. I am also impressed on how you present the aspect that the group was far to involved with each other’s lives to be healthy. Alice simply had no boundaries. I think Shane did and maybe even Dana did. Jenny was just crazy and Alice took no responsibility for her own actions and decisions. The biggest surprise was Kit. I guess that is what happens when you allow addictions to control your life.
This was a wonderful story and well written. I have really enjoyed it from front to back. I believe that Tina still has a bit more maturing to do but in time with Bette’s help she will get there. New York is truly a wonderful place for this family. Thank You for sharing this….I look forward to reading your other writings in the near future.
Standing ovation for Ally :-)
Thanks Ally! Love your stories so much!! Thanks!!
Like Hellbent says
“The End ! Really ????????”
6 years later Angie is 12, 1 year from being a teen! And, unknown baby is 6!
Really, I love your work and need more. PLEASE!