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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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Shane couldn’t help the smirk that tugged at her lips as she angled her head and whispered into the Latina’s ear, “Wanna go get coffee with me?”
Carmen found herself fighting the urge to bite her lip, the shiver that spread through her body unpreventable. Shane’s warm breath tickled her ear in a way that made her want to moan and right then Carmen knew she was in trouble. She nodded quickly and pulled back before the brunette could try anything sneaky, adjusting her clothes that suddenly felt too tight.
Dana had been sitting on the edge of her seat as she argued with Alice, leaving a fair amount of space for Carmen to pass to which the Latina took full advantage of. She hopped onto the couch behind Dana, placing a hand on the brunette’s back to steady herself as she made her way across.
Already on her feet, Shane was there at the end to meet her with a hand outstretched in the most romantic way. Carmen tried not to put much mind to it as she placed her hand atop Shane’s and jumped off the couch.
As caught up as she was going back and forth with Dana, Alice still managed to notice Carmen and Shane out of the corner of her eye.
“Hey wait!” She called out as the two went from speed walking to a full on run, turning the corner without so much as looking back.
Alice plopped onto the couch beside Dana, defeated.
“And then there were two” Dana huffed as she threw herself back against the plush cushion.
Alice threw her hands up, “Now what?”
Dana shrugged, “When I left the house, Lara was making samples for a party she’s catering later this week. Maybe she’ll lets us eat whatever is leftover”
Alice contemplated the idea as though it were up for debate. As much as she harbored an unexplained dislike for the chef, Alice couldn’t deny how much she enjoyed Lara’s cooking. It was one of the things that made it hard to hate the redhead. Just as she was going to accept the new plan, she spotted something from the corner of her eye.
She turned her head to face the unexpected sight, her body frozen in place as she looked to one of the store windows across the street. There with her head thrown back in laughter was Lara, exiting a restaurant with a laughing raven haired woman behind her.
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!