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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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Alice pointed her wooden spoon at the Latina, the tip stained blue. “Exactly”
Watching as the wheels turned in Carmen’s head, Shane jumped to get the attention off Alice and her non-rehearsed answer, “And you Car? Please don’t tell me you’re gonna let me go to this thing alone”
The puppy dog eyes she received from the brunette was enough to make Carmen melt, the sight more adorable than ever. The Latina couldn’t deny the weakness she felt for Shane nor her desire to spend time with the brunette.
Since high school, all Carmen had hoped for was for Shane’s attention. Though she had received it, she couldn’t help but notice how Shane had also given her attention to at least ten other girls. The brunette’s lothario status had ensured that Carmen kept her at a distance, no matter how interested she might have been.
Unfortunately the years after high school hadn’t changed the young brunette and her actions had become more notorious than ever.
Having gone to the same university as Shane, Carmen had been all too aware of the brunette’s continued behavior though Shane had done everything she could to keep that part of her life away from Carmen. It was something that the Latina deeply appreciated, even growing to respect and admire the brunette she secretly had feelings for.
Shane looked at her with longing that left the Latina reeling, her grip on the couch suddenly becoming compromised. Her body and heart wanted to say yes to what was so obviously a set up, her friends’ weirder than usual behavior a clear indication. Unfortunately, Carmen’s mind was unable to think passed what she had witnessed earlier that morning.
“That depends” Carmen strained as both she and Dana struggled to get their half of the couch through the doorway, “Are you really gonna be alone or is Sissy James gonna be there too?”
Shane’s eyes widened as she slipped, the name of their old classmate and latest conquest causing her to push the couch forward with more force than necessary. She unintentionally pinned Dana between the door frame and the couch, causing the brunette to squeal.
“Too much, too much!” Dana squeaked as she tried to push against the couch, “Back up, back up!”
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!