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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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The girls just watched her, pensive and possibly even a bit envious. Alice had done what they all had secretly wished to do in the past, each of them missing their hometown at one point or another.
“That’s really cool, Al” Shane offered a genuine smile as she fell onto the couch beside Dana, causing the other brunette to bounce in her seat.
“Yeah, and maybe the rest of you bitches will follow my example one day so we can run this town just like the old days” Alice winked just as a tenant made his way downstairs and came to a stop in front of the couch in the doorway.
She took a step back and motioned for the man to exit the building as if there wasn’t a large obstacle in his way. He looked at her then the couch incredulously, finding the task impossible. For a while no one said a word nor did anyone make a move until at last the man awkwardly stretched out a leg to climb over the arm rest of the couch. Carmen scooted over to give him room just as Dana shifted closer to Shane, ducking as the man’s leg soared over her head.
He hopped to free his other leg, somehow maintaining his balance until finally both feet were firmly on the ground. He walked away without a word as the girls watched him with their eyes only, too tired to do anything else.
“Okay” Alice clapped once he was out of sight, “Break time is over. Let’s get this party started”
Dana draped an arm over her eyes, “Five more minutes”
Alice leaned forward and patted Dana’s leg, “Come on lazy bones. The faster we do this, the faster we can rest?”
“Lazy bones?” Dana laughed incredulously as she pulled her arm from her eyes, “We’ve been moving your shit all day while you stood there and watched”
“Yeah, Al” Shane piped in as she lounged on the couch, “You’ve gotten away with it long enough. Help us out so we can finish”
“I’d love to but .. ugh my back” Alice groaned as she bent over and placed a hand on her lower back, grimacing with pain. “I hurt my back the other day. Remember? I told you I hurt my back”
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!