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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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Panicked, both Shane and Bette pulled the couch backwards and watched as Dana let out a deep breath. She rubbed the sore spot on her stomach as Shane looked at her with guilt, setting the couch on the floor with the help of the other girls and blocking the only door leading to the inside of the apartment.
“Sorry Dane”
Dana offered a genuine smile as she continued to rub her stomach, “Don’t worry about it”
“Why are we even doing this anyway?” Bette huffed as she wiped the beads of sweat from her forehead, turning around to lean her back against the armrest on her side. She looked out toward the busy town street, “There are people you can hire to do this, you know”
Alice shrugged, her focus once more on the icee in her hands. “Why would I pay someone when my wonderful best friends can do it for free?”
She offered a sugar sweet smile, batting her eyelashes at her friends who rolled their eyes in response.
“Why are you even renting this apartment in the first place?” Carmen let out a tired sigh as she plopped onto the other arm rest of the couch, Dana taking a seat on the cushioned seat beside her. “What’s wrong with your mom’s house?”
Alice rolled her eyes as she pulled the wooden spoon out of her mouth, “She has a new boy toy which pretty much says it all. I could barely get any work done”
She gagged with more emphasis than was necessary as Dana just watched her as if she had two heads.
The tennis star raised an eyebrow, “Why don’t you just check into a hotel? I thought you told me that you were only staying in town for another week?”
Alice rolled her eyes again and pointed her accusatory wooden spoon at her best friend, “Why don’t you stop asking so many questions? For your information, I’m not going back”
Everyone responded in unison, their voices echoing throughout the empty hall. “What?!”
Alice shrugged as if she hadn’t said anything remotely shocking, “This is home. As much as I love LA, I’m inspired by being here. I got the idea to move back the last time I was here and these past few days with all of you just solidified it. I already sent for the rest of my stuff, the truck comes in a few days”
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!