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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
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Tina made tea for the three of them while Sue curiously stared at the brunette. “Little Christie is a real sweetheart, I tell you, Bette.”
“Yes, she is.” Bette smiled, eyes following to the slender figure in the small kitchen. “I just sometimes get the feeling that she doesn’t want me at her home. Every time we’re here she gets all nervous.”
“Well, child, there must be some reason.” Sue slowly spoke, her eyes mildly shining as always.
The brunette nodded. “I think it’s her dad. We…uh, haven’t told him about us. And I think she’s afraid what will his reaction be.”
“It takes a lot of understanding. But a parent always comes around.”
“How do you do it? You didn’t even flinch when you saw us…”
“Why should I? Everybody has the right to choose who they’re gonna love.” The old lady chuckled. “If Steven takes a boyfriend home, I’d sure be surprised at first. But that’s his choice. And I shouldn’t stand in his way to find happiness.”
It made Bette laugh. She liked Sue a lot because she seemed so cool. She was glad that Tina had such a wonderful neighbor. These people, normal people, even poor people, they seemed more natural, more lively than those she saw on the daily basis.
“You know what kid, you two stay with me as long as you want.”
“Oh no, we shouldn’t.” Bette thought it was absolutely sweet that old Sue suggested. This white-haired woman represented the figure of an affable grandmother she never got to have. And she cherished this relationship with Sue.
“Yes! Yes you should. I want young people around. You must come often and stay for dinner. Let the old lady feel she’s some kind of useful?”
“I… I don’t know what to say…”
“Say yes!”
Tina walked back with a tray of tea. “Say yes to what?” She served one to Sue and one to her girlfriend.
“Thanks honey.” Bette scooted over for the blonde to sit closely with her. “Sue wants us to stay for dinner.”
“Oh that’s too much trouble.” Tina immediately waved her hand politely.
Sue was determined. “Poppycock. You two stay with me and that’s final.” And then, she went to the fridge, checking what should cook for dinner.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
Thanks (~:
Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢～ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端！
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time，please！finger crossed！
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great