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Side Effects Chapter 11 – WEDDING TIME
Melvin: “she is our guest, she’ll seat in the front with me”
Bette was amazed, and at the same time angry, her dad is still the same jerk, but at least he likes Tina; who at that moment turned to see her and whisper in her ear.
Tina: “is it fine, Bette?”
Bette: “sure baby, as long as he’s treating you well, I’ll be okay”
The girls got on the car while Melvin talked to the guys of the workshop to tow Bette’s car, it was the day before Thanksgiving, when they usually close, but they knew Melvin and came to pick up the car as a favor to him; inside the car Melvin remarked it to Bette, and they rode to the Porter’s home. In the way, Tina was admiring all the night view, it was already 9 pm and she starts asking questions about the neighborhood, the parks, and some landmarks and Melvin was happily answering her questions; after 15 minutes they arrived home, Tina and Bette start taking their belongs, but Melvin took the things from Tina and carried them inside, so Tina try to help Bette.
Tina: “let me help you with that, your daddy took mines, he is very nice”
Bette: “apparently…, it’s a part of him I didn’t know…”
The Porter’s home was a very comfortable three-story house; in the first floor were located the living and dining rooms, the kitchen, a bathroom and a room for Melvin’s rehearsals; in the second floor the dormitories of Melvin and Maxine and the one of Kit, there were two bathrooms and a room Maxine uses as home-office; in the third floor were Bette’s and Marcus’ bedrooms, two bathrooms and a small room for Kit’s rehearsals.
Maxine came to the living room to hug her daughter and to be introduced to Tina; she told them to take her things to Bette’s old bedroom in the third floor, Marcus came from the kitchen too and introduced himself to Tina after hugging her sister and offered to help them with their luggage.
Bette: (looking at her brother while climbing the stairs) “why you didn’t come to pick us up instead of dad?”
Marcus: “I just arrived, mom told me your car broke down…, was dad impolite with Tina?”
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Bibi28 says
Hi proteonomics,
Thank you so much for dedicating the chapter to me ????❤️
I hope i am able to read it today or saturday. Have to work a lot this week.
Thanks again ????
Zhenya says
Thanks for the chapter! I love Tibette wedding, but i was hoping you give us more pages in story for this event.
proteonomics says
Hi Zhenya:
Yup, you’re totally right, I was thinking to write more of the wedding, too, I even have partially written the wedding vows, but it was going to be too long and I needed to reach the scene of Tasha and Alice; besides sometimes I put much attention to some general comments and PMs, and I didn’t want to have a rating R or 17, this time.
But “the night is young” and who knows what will happen in the next chapters that will have the wedding night in the beginning.
For my next wedding (I mean TIBETTE’s wedding) I’ll write more in detail.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
P
Bibi28 says
Hey proteonomics,
My lovely wife allowed me to read your update!
I am so glad Bette &Tina are married and that Tina’s mom was there. But i am still a little worried how Tina is going to react when she finds out Bette was in contact with Louise. She will be pissed of.
Alice & Tasha, hmm, i loved them together in the L Word. But i think Tasha gets her heart broken when Alice &Dana will be reunited.
Mr. Kennard get what he deserve and i hope this will be only the beginning.
Loved the update, thank you ????
proteonomics says
Hi Bibi, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! again ????????????????????????
Thanks for reading and commenting Bibi. You’re totally right, Tina is going to be very pissed with everybody (????????
Yes, Alice has to think about many things, who knows how Dana comes back (if she comes back, which I hope so)
And you’re again right, this is the beginning for Don Kennard, but remember there is nothing worse than a wounded beast.
I better stop, don’t want to write a whole chapter here.
Have a very nice day today and always.
P
Bibi28 says
Oh P,
How could you stop, you almost wrote your next chapter ????
Thanks again for the Birthday wishes ????
proteonomics says
????????????
I mean, to write a whole new chapter in the replay of your comment.
BTW, I asked Jacky about the title of my next story, and she gave me green light (which means she said it’s fine).
We talk in a few weeks in my next post.
P
Bibi28 says
Good news!
wkm says
Enjoyed the update. Thanks.
Don deserves a butt kicking
proteonomics says
Hi, wkm:
Thanks for reading and commenting, Yes Don is evil.
P
SassyGran says
Hi,
Nice update,enjoyed and look forward to your next post.
Thanks for a great story.
SG
proteonomics says
Hi SG:
Thanks for reading and commenting, I’ll try to post soon, but as many times, job and other things come in the way, but I’ll try.
Thanks again
P
SassyGran says
You can but try,