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Something so right -chapter 25
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Helena could see that Bette’s prime concern was for Tina and she was surprised. From everything she had heard – and she had been asking around since Tina had told her who she was dating. From everything that she had heard about Bette Porter the picture she had emerged with was Bette’s first, second and last priority was Bette Porter . This little scene told a very different tale. Bette was looking at Tina with concern as well as love
“What about what ?” Tina looked at Bette
“I don’t mind if we don’t go – we can just as easily go to the movies or have dinner somewhere nice or stay in and watch movies and eat Chinese “ Bette offered
Tina glanced at Helena before looking back at Bette
“No – no I want to go to Liquid. Its about time every lesbian in town saw for herself that you and I are a couple “
Bette beamed “ Yes we are “
Tina looked at Helena “Are you free Ms Peabody ?”
“Wouldn’t miss it for the world darling -give me a call on Friday. I am out of town from tonight -off to San Diego “
“What’s her name – you avoided my question earlier “
“What’s whose name ?” Helena looked the picture of wide eyed innocence
“Wait until Friday – couple of cocktails inside of you and you won’t be able to resist boasting about your latest conquest “ Tina pointed at Helena
Helena chuckled “ Be warned Bette – the CIA come to Tina for advice. Don’t be fooled by that hippy parents b/s – Tina is as sharp as a razor “
Bette took Tina’s hand and kissed it
“She’s amazing “
Helena left reflecting on the scene she had witnessed – well stone me – if Tina hasn’t gone and totally transformed Big Bad Bette Porter into a pussycat – who would have thought it ?
After Helena had gone Tina snuggled up to Bette and kissed her on the lips
“I like that you are here “
Bette stroked Tina’s hair and rubbed her ass “ I like being here – you have a nice office”
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Loved it AllyE, they are so very sweet together and what they do to each other, oh boy. PPS
Bette was going to get her payback on Tina. she turn the rable on Bette. It hell to wait for your payback tho. They are so cute together. thanks
Loved the scene with Helena and Bette!! And i really shouldn’t have read this at work! Awwww Hell!! Great job!
Brilliant thanks
Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.
Great story ally…This is a great story…
so looking foward to the liquid scene. hope u post soon and that the next chapter will be longer because i can’t get enough of your writing.
Another absolutely perfect chapter Ally.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too sweet…can’t wait to see the reaction of the hussies at Liquid…TK IS TOO HOT!!!
Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!
Wow! I shouldn’t have read this chapter at work. I enjoyed this Ally!
so so so beautiful! I love this story so much. I cant wait for the next chap. Thanks Ally!
HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
That was very hot.Shower sex is always good.I hope going to Liquid is a good idea.PPS.
Please post again very soon :)
Great chapter! I’m glad to see that Helena is starting to realize that Bette is a human being and that she loves Tina. Thanks!
Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC
Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS
well that was good to read at work. way to many sick people. thx
ahhhhhh…..very nice Ally…sweet and tender and sooo sensuous and can’t wait for the club scene ;-)
Workout within a workout sounds good to me! Really liking helena in this story she is watching out for tina.. bette is winning helena over slowly! :)
That was hot and funny!