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    Something so right – chapter 82

    Story written on April 26, 2009 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette, Tina and Mrs Porter

     

     

    “I assume that Melvin has been his usual self and not done what is right for you “

     

     

    “My father has a lot of faults but he didn’t walk out on me “

     

     

    “But he is with-holding your trust fund “

     

     

    “What trust fund ?”

     

     

    “The one I set up for you when you were born – the one that you inherited on your 30th birthday “

     

     

    “Bette doesn’t know anything about a trust fund “

     

     

    “I gather – this is a nice house but if you had been given your trust fund you would have been able to afford something much better “

     

     

    Bette bristled “ We both love this house – we don’t want anything flasher “

     

     

    “It would have been nice to have the choice “

     

     

    “How much is the fund worth ?” Tina asked

     

     

    “I think that’s between Bette and I “

     

     

     

    Bette stood up “Okay – this charade has gone on long enough – if you had done some research you would have known that Tina is not only my partner but my best friend and my soul mate and that I do not take any criticism of her lightly – in fact its dicing with death to put down Tina in my hearing “

     

     

    “It doesn’t matter babe “

     

     

    “It matters to me “ Bette replied “Okay so you are my mother – or for some reason you have got enough evidence to show that you are her. I have often wondered what you look like – well now I know – look us up in another 27 years “

     

    “Bette – I want to make amends “

     

     

    Bette shook her head “How can you make amends for 27 years of pain that you have inflicted on me ? “

     

     

    “Because you deserve an explanation. All you have heard for 27 years is his side of the story which I assure you is not the reality “

     

     

    “Did you walk out on me when I was 4 ?”

     

     

    “Yes but do you know why ?”

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    1. Great Update!!! I love the twist you have put to this story. Now let us see if Melvin will tell Bette the truth. I hope Bette gives her mother a chance. Thank you Ally PPVS

    3. So Melvin’s a big fat liar huh? I’m interested to see why her mom stayed away so long. I like Tina standing up for Bette. Great story! Thanks for posting!

    6. I know Bette is pisssed, well probably more than pissed at her mom but I think she should at least listen to what she has to say. If Melvin has been untruthful to her all these years what makes her think he will tell her everything now? I don’t think her mom is trying to buy her affection how could she after 27 years. Speak to her mom and see what she has to say about why she left without her all those years ago and then talk to her dad and see if any of the story matches. Most mothers will not leave thier children unless something horribl ecauses them to. I hope Bette gets all her answers she deserves it and I’m glad Tina is right there by her side. PPS

    7. Nice twist girl. I think that Bette should talk to her mother to see exactly what she has to say. She has listen to Melvin all of her life and this way she will be comming from a position of strength and knowledge when she speaks to Melvin. At least her mother is adcepting of her and Tina as a couple. PPS:o).

    8. I would like to hear the reason Bette’s mother for abandoning her. Must be big if she schose to stayed away all those years. Is she sick? :D And the trust fund ha….curious…LOL

    12. Melvin’s ass is minced meat. I hope B lays into him. I hope Bette talks to her mother and finds out what really happened. Tina is one tough cookie, taking no shit from Mrs. P. Great update. PPS. I’m loving it.

    15. Holy cow, now this twist takes the story down a whole new avenue. I like the intrigue that you have introduced to this Ally. Can’t wait for the next addition!

    18. Ally, you are such a wild genius. This is such a superb twist. I love the way you make Bette and Tina dig deeper into their lives together. Thank you for giving us so much to chew on!

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