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The Most Distance Course
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“Well, I have to take the blame, you see, Miss Bette, I have congenital heart disease, which means I can’t do hard works, it’s not a big deal when your young, but when you got my age even running will kill you, so for supporting this family, Tina has to do two jobs to earn enough money for rents and bills.”
“Oh…I’m sorry for your disease.” Bette feels terrible, what did she do to that girl?
“Oh, no, it’s Chrissy the one who need to apologize for, she works so hard not just to pay the bill, she didn’t buy any clothes or new stuff at all, she saved the money and bought a cable TV, just to make sure this sick old lady was not boring when she’s at work.”
“Not everyone lives a perfect life like you, Bette Porter. You need to know that right before you decide to bully others, I mean poor people in particular, like me, we didn’t born in Fairy tales or wealthy family, we have to work to make a living, we want to play but we can because we know if we don’t earn money, we won’t have food in our next meal, apart from that, our difficulties are much more then you can ever imagine.”
Tina’s word flashing through Bette’s mind, it’s the first day “The Golden Circle” started to prank on her, her words are so vivid, Bette can even describe the resentment on Tina’s face.
“Shit, I should have trusted her…”
“What did you say…?” Mrs. Kennard looks at Bette with a warm smile.
“May I ask a few more question?”
“Sure, go ahead.”
“Tina said that…she’s seen and been through a lot, what did she mean?”
Mrs. Kennard let out a huge sigh, she slowly sits down to a rocking chair, Bette promptly steps forward giving a helping hand.
“Thank you, Miss Bette, it’s very nice of you.”
Listen to that, Bette doesn’t feel happy at all, she feels terrible, figuring that all those years she’s done were terrible and unforgivable. Also, she believes that Tina has told her aunt about her identity, or her aunt won’t keep calling her “Miss Bette”.
“Please, call me Bette.” Bette says politely.
“Right, Bette, Chrissy was telling the truth, she did being through hell lot, not a single person can doubt that.” Mrs. Kennard says as she drinks her tea. “Dear Lord, please let Cristina forgive what I’m going to say…”
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CJ
What a great Chapter. Not easy to read of Chrissy’s back story.
Thank you for this Christmas present.
Odd to say I ‘enjoyed’ the read but I did. It certainly left me wanting more!
Have a great Christmas. Thank you again for this post.
I look forward to my New Year Chapter:-).
Well done,
SG
Hi! Merry Christmas and thanks for the chapter!
I was little confused on first pages until i read it was Bette dream.
Very sad story about Tina past and compare to it i don’t feel sorry for Bette’s past – because i still only see her like little spoiled rich girl. Of course we can blame her father, but i think it’s not his fault that his daughter choose to become a friends with Adele and Kelly. It’s only was Betty’s choice not only do nothing when her “friends” hurting another kids, but and actually be a part of this bullying.. Yeah, Melvin might not play attention about his daughter, but i don’t buy it like excuse for Bette, because Tina grew up in much worse conditions, but she became very nice and lovely woman, not like this Bette.
So for now i still think that Tina to good for this Bette
Thanks again for the chapter and waiting for the next!
I forget to add –
1) Tina working in a Planet owned by Kit? It’s good, maybe Kit can help her little sister to find backbone, because obviously Bette can find it by her own.
2) Who is Tina’s mother and did Adele use this info to hurt Tina?
3) Why in Bette’s dream Tina talking about become criminal?
I hope we can find answers on it in the future.
Hi CJ,
That was a really intense chapter to read!
The background on Tina’s early youth was truly sad, she is a strong woman and a fighter and despite her awfull youth she is so kind and warm.
For Bette’s background, it is always sad when your mother walks away and your father is a cold man, but she had a kind woman in her life and it must have been very hard when she died.
Both Tina & Bette endured lost, but it is interesting to read how they deal with it in different ways.
Loved the way how you explained the title of your story via Tina’s thoughts about Bette’s poem.
You have me curious about Bette’s dream, will Tina do something that make her a bad person?
Kit owns the Planet and Tina works there, maybe she will bring Bette & Kit close as sisters.
Hmm, Peggy Peabody and Tina’s mother are making me curious also.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
I wish you a wonderfull Christmas CJ and a fantastic 2019!!!
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, I’m very sorry for Tina’s past, she suffered a lot, poor Bette too, It is sad, both cases you can’t compare how they feel and who suffered more or less because it is a very personal experience and feeling, Bette could think her suffering is nothing related to Tina’s, but everything is relative, perhaps Tina has some deep secret and Bette in her dreams is foresight it.
Well, we will have more explanation later from your next post, well done CJ.
Thanks for the amazing chapter, waiting for the next one.
P
Sorry, forgot another thing – great job with pictures, i like it very much!