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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on April 13, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    “What?” Carmen frowns. “That is bullshit! That—” “Right, let’s cut the bullshit, you can say those to Jodi, but not me, Carmen…” Tina says. “Or…L? Which do you prefer?” “I don’t know what the fuck you are talking about!” Carmen yells. “Everything you said is full of shit, it is you who want the fucking

    “What?” Carmen frowns. “That is bullshit! That—”

    “Right, let’s cut the bullshit, you can say those to Jodi, but not me, Carmen…” Tina says. “Or…L? Which do you prefer?”

    “I don’t know what the fuck you are talking about!” Carmen yells. “Everything you said is full of shit, it is you who want the fucking throne! And you set out the trap, trying to kick away adversaries by letting them take the blame…”

    “Shuts the fuck up!” Tina snaps out, she pulls out the gun from her right-side belt, points the gun to Carmen’s head. “Unless you want to give us the name of your accomplices, there must be more than one rat like you, am I right?”

    “Fuck you,” Carmen says bitterly. “I have no idea what you are talking about, I am not a god damn spy!”

    “If so, how do you explain the corpse case? Huh? If it were not you, how did the body be easily found? Huh? No one knew there was once a brothel in that place, no one knew there were dead bodies under the camping area unless the person in the know!”

    “I was not the only one knew about this, you knew it!”

    Carmen tries to grab Tina’s clothes, but Tasha are faster. Right before she’s going to touch Tina’s, she already grabs the brunette and throw her few feet away near the river. With a small cracking sound, Carmen wince in pain, some part of her body should be broken.

    Tina slowly walks close to Carmen, she squats down in front of the Latino, who is struggling to balance her body not to fall in the mud.

    “Really? Then how come the FBI never caught your brothel? Huh? Why’s your people never got caught? Except you, all other five leaders dealing foothold has been broken by the fucking police?”

    Sebastian Cooper’s bodyguard, Max, impatiently looks at his watch, he clears his throat, implying Tina to end this soon. Tina clenches her fists.

    “Enough talking, if you don’t tell the truth, there is no use for you alive.”

    “It is you! Who is a betrayer!” Carmen yells. “Where’s your thankfulness? Cooper? Huh? Don’t forget I save your damn life when you were a prostitute!”

    Tina takes a deep breath, trying to ignore Carmen’s cursing words.

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    1. Hi! Thank you for the chapter!

      But i must say i don’t like what happened in this chapter.

      First – Tina on grugs again.
      Second – like i said earlier i don’t care about Carmen death. But i have suspicion that (spoiler) But in this case obviously that Bette didn’t know anything about this, but i can feel that Sam knew. So Tina trust Sam more than Bette. And for me it death sentence for B&T realationship.

      So we will see if i right than

    3. I think my comment got lost in space again! ????

      Sad that Carmen had to be taken away by Tina.

      How much more can Tina endure? She is a brilliant and strong woman and i am glad that that she has the love and support from Bette. And yes Sam as well.

      You left with a cliffie again!ooking forward to the next chapter!

    4. Hard chapter.

      I don’t like idea that Tina still on drugs too. And what was about Tina raped by her own father?
      And who is next according her plan?

    6. Hi CJ:
      Strong chapter, hard to imagine Tina killing Carmen, but in a former chapter, Tina said that she made modifications on her gun (?) Is there something you haven’t write here?

      You wrote here what I already suspected reading former chapters, but I wasn’t totally sure, Sebastian Cooper had sex with Tina in the brothel despite recognizing her as her own daughter; that guy is not a man, he is not an animal, he is the damn walking devil, he deserves to be burned alive and slowly; I heard of a few cases like this in real life and always made me sick and there is no excuse for the father, poor Tina.

      I like Bette very much, how she trusts, supports and protectsTina no matter what.
      Great chapter CJ, keep the good work.

      P

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