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    The Most Distant Course

    Jodi’s face turns red, she’s angry with Tina’s provoking. Bette quietly observes her. Her loosen shirt was flailing in the aside and pants hanging crisply on her waist, could almost fall in any second. Her burning eyes abound with blood streak, the anxiety and fretful cannot hide. Dark eyes bags under Jodi’s grey eyes are terrifying, she is so much different than the woman Bette first met a few months ago. These whole changes produce further proof of how deep she had sunk in drug abuse.

    “I’ve already found enough to proof Carmen de la Pica Morales is a fucking undercover, these pictures authenticate that she did have contact with the FBI.” Jodefendsend for herself.

    This is exactly what Tina wants to hear, she wants Jodi to claim she has done her job well in front of the boss, she wants everyone to hear that the person in charge in this job think she has closed the case.

    Warm up time is over, time for the opening game. Round 1.

    Tina lifts her eyebrows. “You found enough evidence to proof Carmen is an undercover? I’m not sure about that.”

    “You don’t need to be sure about anything, younger sister, Carmen is being imprisoned, her undercover identity has been confirmed.” Jodi says with grinding teeth.

    “Don’t be too confident about that, if Carmen really was being identified as an undercover, what are we doing now? Shouldn’t we already put this traitor to death?”

    “Father wants to make sure what has she done to the company.”

    “Yes, father indeed needed to so, and about that, what do you recommend we should do?” Tina says.

    “Interrogation with torture the prisoner until she confessed, certainly.” Jodi sneers.

    “Which will only waste time and effort,” Tina strikes back. “As a woman, Carmen can stay in this company for so long was because of what? Her beauty? Her body? No, she’s smart and strong, your little trick to her is no use for her, eventually, you will get nothing but a dead body.”

    “What do you propose?” Sebastian Cooper’s voice suddenly appear, Jodi whines a bit but Tina remains her position.

    The boss is interested. Round 2.

    “Carmen de la Pica Morales is a reasonable woman, giving her a well explain, she knows herself, no need that creepy tool for interrogate, she will confess sooner or later.” Tina says. “As for your so-called evidence…”

    Comments

    1. Hi! Thank you for the chapter!

      But i must say i don’t like what happened in this chapter.

      First – Tina on grugs again.
      Second – like i said earlier i don’t care about Carmen death. But i have suspicion that (spoiler) But in this case obviously that Bette didn’t know anything about this, but i can feel that Sam knew. So Tina trust Sam more than Bette. And for me it death sentence for B&T realationship.

      So we will see if i right than

    2. I think my comment got lost in space again! ????

      Sad that Carmen had to be taken away by Tina.

      How much more can Tina endure? She is a brilliant and strong woman and i am glad that that she has the love and support from Bette. And yes Sam as well.

      You left with a cliffie again!ooking forward to the next chapter!

    3. Hi CJ:
      Strong chapter, hard to imagine Tina killing Carmen, but in a former chapter, Tina said that she made modifications on her gun (?) Is there something you haven’t write here?

      You wrote here what I already suspected reading former chapters, but I wasn’t totally sure, Sebastian Cooper had sex with Tina in the brothel despite recognizing her as her own daughter; that guy is not a man, he is not an animal, he is the damn walking devil, he deserves to be burned alive and slowly; I heard of a few cases like this in real life and always made me sick and there is no excuse for the father, poor Tina.

      I like Bette very much, how she trusts, supports and protectsTina no matter what.
      Great chapter CJ, keep the good work.

      P

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