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    The Most Distant Course

    Tina waves at the pictures on the whiteboard, the pictures she secretly passed to Jodi. In every picture, Carmen was talking to one man respectively, some were people in the FBI, some were from the police force, and the picture taking time was happened to be a few days before Cooper’s people got arrested, or the crime stronghold got exposed, but none of them directly pointed out Carmen was working for them.

    “Took you long enough, huh?” Tina smiles coldly. “What evidence you call this? Pictures she met with some governments? Or the FBI agent who happened to want some relieve in her brothel? These pictures you called evidence, for me, they are pieces of shit, nothing can prove Carmen de la Pica Morales is a real spy.”

    “Really? Then what? Is your so call evidence that can really confirm that she is the undercover?

    Tina remains her evil smile, she tilts her head, Sam immediately hand a document folder to all the people sitting in the chair.

    Her question indicates she’s fallen into a trap. Round 3.

    “These are the coded messages intercepted by the Telecommunications company we work with. At first glance, nothing more than a simple ad for the entertainment place, but according to the changing words in it, each of the ads contains a message from the spy. I’ve done my research and use our inside line in the FBI, this spy who is hiding in the Cooper company called ‘L’, a highly professional undercover who used unusual way to pass the message, regarding a new wave of arrest and capture.”

    Tina explain everything without looking at the document. Bette can feel her sweat starts to drop down her forehead, even she stays as calm as possible, as a temporary member of the FBI, through reading through the gather material Tina provides, she can surely believe Carmen is ‘L’ by some tiny details only the FBI will know.

    Carmen is L…Bette thinks. L is a woman…

    “Carmen use her authority in the Copper brothel, send the company intelligence to the FBI agent, at the same time using her girls to collect information of the underground transaction. In addition to providing the organization with the information of our working partners, she also provides favorable information to the authorities. The corpse case was based on the information provided by the old customers in the burned down the brothel, Carmen use this information and the relationship between the brothel operator Gomey and his relative Mark Wayland, dug up the old case and put our gun trader in this case, knowing his close partnership with Curtis Beech, she indirectly used this connection to remove the two heads.”

    Comments

    1. Hi! Thank you for the chapter!

      But i must say i don’t like what happened in this chapter.

      First – Tina on grugs again.
      Second – like i said earlier i don’t care about Carmen death. But i have suspicion that (spoiler) But in this case obviously that Bette didn’t know anything about this, but i can feel that Sam knew. So Tina trust Sam more than Bette. And for me it death sentence for B&T realationship.

      So we will see if i right than

    2. I think my comment got lost in space again! ????

      Sad that Carmen had to be taken away by Tina.

      How much more can Tina endure? She is a brilliant and strong woman and i am glad that that she has the love and support from Bette. And yes Sam as well.

      You left with a cliffie again!ooking forward to the next chapter!

    3. Hi CJ:
      Strong chapter, hard to imagine Tina killing Carmen, but in a former chapter, Tina said that she made modifications on her gun (?) Is there something you haven’t write here?

      You wrote here what I already suspected reading former chapters, but I wasn’t totally sure, Sebastian Cooper had sex with Tina in the brothel despite recognizing her as her own daughter; that guy is not a man, he is not an animal, he is the damn walking devil, he deserves to be burned alive and slowly; I heard of a few cases like this in real life and always made me sick and there is no excuse for the father, poor Tina.

      I like Bette very much, how she trusts, supports and protectsTina no matter what.
      Great chapter CJ, keep the good work.

      P

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