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The Most Distant Course
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The waitress remains her head low, both of her arms fold in the front, body slightly bows down, a few locks of her dark brown hair fall down from her forehead.
Even though the woman isn’t standing straight and clearly, she’s tempted to hide her face, but no matter what, she cannot hide from Bette Porter’s eagle-eyed, which are now dark but dull.
Bette’s eyebrows slowly from, her eyes open wide. Cannot refrain her shocked, she unconsciously staggers back a bit.
Taking a very deep breath, her eyes still wide open. As if something sticks in her throat, Bette tries hard to swallow down the air.
The woman closes her eyes, her lips are trembling, but she hides it well.
“You…” Almost like a whisper, Bette finally bursts out a word.
Even the hair isn’t the same color, it is the face…that continuously came up in her dream…bothered her every day the past three years…the one she’s been craving for…the most beautiful face she can never forget.
“You…you are…”
No, no…it cannot be possible…
More and more people start to gather around them, curious about what is happening. The two women are basically neglecting what is going on beside them, Bette is in the state of shock, and the other who looks just like Tina Kennard stays silent, none of them want to start the dialogue or greet to others.
“Tina…”
Two lines of tears fall down from the detective’s cheek, the woman sees it, but says nothing. She remains her head low, pretending she doesn’t see what happened to the brunette, but her palms clench together tightly.
“Who are you?” Bette asks again, trying to fight back her tears. “What’s your name?”
The woman remains silent; her head bows low so that the detective cannot see her eyes.
“I’m no one, ma’am, I’m sorry for bumping into you…” The waitress says timidly.
“You are Tina? Right? You know Tina Kennard?” Tell me! Please!
“Baby!
Candace runs to Bette, her face turns red by the anger when she sees the brunette’s beautiful uniform is soaking wet. Clearly, she is oblivious about the two people looking awkwardly at each other.
“What have you done!”
Candace is almost howling at the waitress, she snatches off the towel the brown hair girl is holding, carefully helping Bette to clean up the dripping.
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Hi CJ,
I am so happy to see this update!!!
We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.
I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.
It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.
The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.
Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.
One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
I love this story!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Xxx, your loyal fan ????
Hi CJ,
Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!
Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!
Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.
Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!
Thanks for posting PPS
SG
Hi CJ:
Always an excellent chapter.
Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.
In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.
I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)
Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.
So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.
Thanks again for the wonderful story.
P
Hi!
Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.
I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.
Great chapter CJ!
I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.
Thanks and PPS!