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The Most Distant Course
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“Are you alright? Baby? Are you hurt?”
Hearing this, Bette’s face flushes red.
It’s been over two years, namely, Tina and she were broken up since the blonde left her. It is no wrong for Bette to start a new relationship. However, standing face to face with the brown hair girl who supposed was dead, why does she feel like she’s being caught by cheating? And Tina…or the waitress who looks just like Tina only bends her body even low for the guilt, no intention to defend herself at all.
Who are you exactly? Are you Tina? Or are you a ghost?
Bette takes a deep breath, she is astonished…and still confused as hell, just is not the time to be oversensitive.
“Candace, it’s nothing…I just need to change, plus, it’s only some drink not soup so—”
Candace turns her head to the waitress. “Do you have any idea how expensive this suit is? How do you think she can pay for this?”
“—I’m fine and totally unharmed…” Bette finally finished her sentence.
“What is happening here?” Franklin Phillips emerges from the crowd and comes to the middle of the mess.
“The waitresses here certainly don’t know how to do their job.” Candace says bitterly.
“Candace!”
“What? Bette? Am I not right?”
“You are overreacting.” Bette lowers her voice. “This is no big deal.”
“Are you alright? Porter?” Franklin asks.
“Yes, sir, I’m fine.”
The organizers’ manager also comes toward them, passing through the people, he immediately glances at Bette’s dirty shirt, knowing what happened right away.
“Oh my god, I am so sorry, Ms. Porter, let me just go to the kitchen and dry them off for you.”
“Yes, please, and remember be very careful not to hurt the garment.” Candace says worryingly, Bette rolls her eyes.
“Yes, ma’am, no need to worry, my people will take very good care of it.”
The manager gives them both a flattering smile, however, when he turns back to his employee, those smiling face promptly wipes out, almost quicker than turning books.
“Why are you still standing here? Do I pay you for these messes? Go back to work!”
The woman’s only reaction was an embarrassment silence, she squeezes her own arms, giving Bette a meaningful look, the detective is completely shocked those hazel eyes spelled death, a cold feeling run through her entire body. But when she looks back at the waitress again, she is already turning her body away from the brunette.
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Hi CJ,
I am so happy to see this update!!!
We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.
I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.
It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.
The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.
Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.
One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
I love this story!!!
Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Xxx, your loyal fan ????
Hi CJ,
Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!
Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!
Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.
Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!
Thanks for posting PPS
SG
Hi CJ:
Always an excellent chapter.
Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.
In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.
I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)
Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.
So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.
Thanks again for the wonderful story.
P
Hi!
Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.
I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.
Great chapter CJ!
I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.
Thanks and PPS!