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The Most Distant Course
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The new ‘Planet’ is two times bigger, there are two bar counter and a place to offer fruits, more employees, also more places to eat indoors.
“There is, Kit.” Bette waves to the direction of an African American woman, Kit Porter, Bette’s sister. The detective gives Tina a reassuring kiss on the hand; she whispers something into the blondes’ ear.
“Will you wait here for a second? I’ll be right back.”
Tina slightly nods, Bette then walks towards the cafe owner alone.
The woman looks older but still very good looking, her hair is shorter than the last time Tina has seen her, she’s a kind lady who treated young Tina well.
“Hey, Kit.”
“Baby sis,” Kit opens her arms, giving Bette her lovely big hug. “I thought you’re at work.”
“Everyone needs a break.” Bette shrugs.
“Fair enough, what do you want to eat tonight?”
“Not so fast, sis, there’s someone I’m gonna introduce to you and the gangs.”
“Ah, my baby sis got her new target, huh? It’s better this won’t to be a woman like that Candace Jewell.”
“I promise she’s not, she’s really nice and kind…And why did you always have to question my taste?”
“I’m always having questions about your taste,” Kit snorts proudly, she wipes her hands with the towel on the bar counter. “You couldn’t resist those pretty seductive girls.”
“That’s…not true.” Bette chuckles nervously, afraid that the particular blonde might hear her sister. “Anyway, do you want to meet her or not?”
“Of course I’m going to meet her,” Kit picks up a huge cook chopper, using the same towel she cleaned her hands to wipe the blade clean, pretending she’s checking how sharp the knife is. “Now…where’s the woman whom my baby sis is interested in?”
Bette sighs powerlessly. She’s grateful for her sister’s overprotectiveness, but most of the time Kit could be way too exaggerated. Taking a huge chopper with her still cannot hide the kindness in her eyes; a running out rat could have scared her to shit even if she’s holding the killing weapon.
“Kit…please, be nice.”
“I will, I will.” Kit says with a dramatic voice, hands pat on the knife she’s holding, not convincing. “As long as I find out what kind of woman she is, then maybe I’ll think about treating her nicely…Now, enough talking, where’s the woman you’ve been going out so far?”
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Hi CJ,
I wanted to wish you a beautiful Birthday again!!!
What a wonderful surprise you gave us today.
After dinner i hope to read it and leave a comment ????????
Hi CJ,
That was a incredible update!!!!
Bette is so cute and so happy that she has Tina back!!!
I had to laugh very hard when i read this:
“Wiping her last tear away, Kit returns back to her stern face to the detective and smack hard on the back of Bette’s head.
“Aw! What the fuck, Kit?”
“What are you doing, baby sis, look at her, she’s become even thinner than the last time I saw her! Her face is so pale! Did you ever treat Tina with a proper meal or did you just satisfied her in bed like other women in the old times?”
“Wait…” Bette nervously looks at Tina who’s now raising her eyebrows; she opens her mouth, stunned. “Wha…?”
So funny, i love Kit and how she hugged and greeted Tina!
Tina need and deserve to have a family who love and care about her.
You use all the characters from the original show, Kate Arden as Tina’s boss who has a crush on her, and Kit’s former boyfriend as FBI agent. You had me worried for a moment.
The man in black who left Tina the message, she felt a danger, but he only left her the message that Faye Buckley joined the game. Who is he and how does the person who wrote the message the way Tina and Carmen communicated in the past?
I am worried about the side effect that the drugs left Tina, she needs her brain and quick thinking but if she shared her master game with Bette i have to trust that together they will win this game.
The game is on!!!
Thank you so much for the shout out and this incredible journey you take us on!!!
Aaah, this sucks!!! My comment has disappeared ????
Will try to find it and post again!
Hi CJ,
I send you a PM, my comment is awaiting moderation, seems i used a word that isn’t allowed ????
Happy Birthday, CJ!
And i like that picture!
I hope Alice not recognizing Tina, when they meet, because if she do – it will be a problem.
Ok, so Backey and Aaron only one who’s left – interesting will be read how Tibette handling with them
Just logged in to wish you Happy Belated Birthday. Though my greeting is reaching little late, but I hope that it’ll bring plenty of happiness on your face.
Hola cj me encantó este capitulo cada día se pone más bueno y esperando el otro gracias
Happy belated birthday CJ. Thanks for this new chapter, Not looking good for Tina with the FBI sniffing around. Hope she trusts Bette to help her take down Faye and Aaron.
Hi CJ:
Happy birthday again, my friend. ????????????????????????????????????
The picture you put here is not only a gift to yourself but for many of us; happy times that perhaps won’t come back. ????????????????
Excellent chapter, Tina and Bette are a wonderful couple again. I like very much how protective is Bette for her girlfriend and lover.
Tina is in a hard place, her boss Kate is interested in her and of course, she is not, but who knows how Kate could react.
Buckley and Aaron, that is a dangerous alliance against Tina, and Bette; because Buckley may have more than one reason to hurt Bette and even being a stupid, Aaron will want to do anything in his power to smash Tina and his former undercovered spy in the Cooper empire. I’m wondering if James is doing something to help Tina.
Nice story, CJ, it is getting exciting.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter again.
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Happy Birthday, CJ! Thank you for continuing your great story. I love this photo of Tibet. They were so young and happy. Keep up the good work and keep Tina and Bette safe from Aaron and Faye. PPS