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The Most Distant Course
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Bette shakes her head helplessly.
“Right.”
The detective walks back to the direction of her lover; she gives Tina a lovely smile and a long passionate kiss, making the shy blonde blushes. She softly takes Tina’s hand and leads her to the counter, where Kit’s attention is focusing on her weapon.
“Sis,” Bette calls Kit, the elder woman who’s still focusing on her knife rising in her hand, her eyebrows frown deeply when she sees the two women standing in front of her. “This is my new girlfriend, she’s—”
“Bloody Hell my good lord…” Kit says blankly.
“Yeah, right. I’ve thought that you might have remembered her, she’s—”
Kit’s eyes are so big that they could almost pop out, the knife in her hand falls down onto the ground and makes a huge voice, loud enough to gain the attention of most customers. The cafe owner looks at the blonde, her whole body’s shaking, her eyes are welling in tears.
Bette is confused. “Kit, why are you looking at her like that?”
“Like what?” Kit’s voice starts to sound funny. “I’m not looking at her in a special way, I’m looking at her like years ago, since the day she walked into my store…her hair was so short, wore baggy pants and old green jacket…This is how I look at her…Tina, my baby girl.”
In a brief moment, Kit hugs the petite blonde into her chest, squeezing her into a tight embrace, so tight that Tina can barely breathe.
“Oh my god, oh my god…thanks to the holy mother and gods look at you, you are so beautiful…and so big! Thank goodness! You are alright; I was so worried about you! It’s been years!”
“It’s… nice to meet you too…Kit.” Tina manages to make a sound, but the elder woman hugs her too tight.
“Kit, come on, she cannot breathe!”
Seeing her lovers face starts to turn blue, Bette pats on Kits back, the elder woman finally let go of Tina, who is now coughing violently, the brunette looks at her with worrying eyes; her hand absurdly pats on her girlfriends back.
“You okay, baby?”
“Yeah…I’m fine.” Tina smiles, she didn’t blame Kit, the elder woman used to be emotional and rush, but always kind, the same Kit she knew.
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Hi CJ,
I wanted to wish you a beautiful Birthday again!!!
What a wonderful surprise you gave us today.
After dinner i hope to read it and leave a comment ????????
Hi CJ,
That was a incredible update!!!!
Bette is so cute and so happy that she has Tina back!!!
I had to laugh very hard when i read this:
“Wiping her last tear away, Kit returns back to her stern face to the detective and smack hard on the back of Bette’s head.
“Aw! What the fuck, Kit?”
“What are you doing, baby sis, look at her, she’s become even thinner than the last time I saw her! Her face is so pale! Did you ever treat Tina with a proper meal or did you just satisfied her in bed like other women in the old times?”
“Wait…” Bette nervously looks at Tina who’s now raising her eyebrows; she opens her mouth, stunned. “Wha…?”
So funny, i love Kit and how she hugged and greeted Tina!
Tina need and deserve to have a family who love and care about her.
You use all the characters from the original show, Kate Arden as Tina’s boss who has a crush on her, and Kit’s former boyfriend as FBI agent. You had me worried for a moment.
The man in black who left Tina the message, she felt a danger, but he only left her the message that Faye Buckley joined the game. Who is he and how does the person who wrote the message the way Tina and Carmen communicated in the past?
I am worried about the side effect that the drugs left Tina, she needs her brain and quick thinking but if she shared her master game with Bette i have to trust that together they will win this game.
The game is on!!!
Thank you so much for the shout out and this incredible journey you take us on!!!
Aaah, this sucks!!! My comment has disappeared ????
Will try to find it and post again!
Hi CJ,
I send you a PM, my comment is awaiting moderation, seems i used a word that isn’t allowed ????
Happy Birthday, CJ!
And i like that picture!
I hope Alice not recognizing Tina, when they meet, because if she do – it will be a problem.
Ok, so Backey and Aaron only one who’s left – interesting will be read how Tibette handling with them
Just logged in to wish you Happy Belated Birthday. Though my greeting is reaching little late, but I hope that it’ll bring plenty of happiness on your face.
Hola cj me encantó este capitulo cada día se pone más bueno y esperando el otro gracias
Happy belated birthday CJ. Thanks for this new chapter, Not looking good for Tina with the FBI sniffing around. Hope she trusts Bette to help her take down Faye and Aaron.
Hi CJ:
Happy birthday again, my friend. ????????????????????????????????????
The picture you put here is not only a gift to yourself but for many of us; happy times that perhaps won’t come back. ????????????????
Excellent chapter, Tina and Bette are a wonderful couple again. I like very much how protective is Bette for her girlfriend and lover.
Tina is in a hard place, her boss Kate is interested in her and of course, she is not, but who knows how Kate could react.
Buckley and Aaron, that is a dangerous alliance against Tina, and Bette; because Buckley may have more than one reason to hurt Bette and even being a stupid, Aaron will want to do anything in his power to smash Tina and his former undercovered spy in the Cooper empire. I’m wondering if James is doing something to help Tina.
Nice story, CJ, it is getting exciting.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter again.
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Happy Birthday, CJ! Thank you for continuing your great story. I love this photo of Tibet. They were so young and happy. Keep up the good work and keep Tina and Bette safe from Aaron and Faye. PPS