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The Most Distant Course
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“Kit, calm down.” Bette says to Kit.
“I’m sorry…” The cafe owner is already sobbing; she keeps wiping her unstoppable falling tear. “I’m sorry, but I’m so happy to see you, Tina, baby girl, I was so worried about you after you left.”
“I missed you too, Kit,” Tina softly embraces the elder woman, her feeling is so right, like being with her family. “It’s so good to see you again.”
“Oh, baby girl, look at you,” Kit shakes her head; she caresses Tina’s blonde hair. “You grew up…Look at those eyes, they are so beautiful.”
“I’m sorry I left without leaving a message.” Tina is also shredding with tears.
“It’s being what? Almost a decade? Jesus, time passed…how have you been? I was so worried about you.”
“I had a tough time these past few years, but I’m now great.” The blonde looks at Bette, who can always make her heart skip a beat. “And I’m very grateful.”
Kit looks back and forth between the couple, the looks in their eyes cannot be hidden, it’s pure love, the way they touch each other is so tender and thoughtful, their every move is caring about their lover, the smile on her sister’s face is bright and wide as if she’s the happiest woman on earth.
Wiping her last tear away, Kit returns back to her stern face to the detective and smack hard on the back of Bette’s head.
“Aw! What the fuck, Kit?”
“What are you doing, baby sis, look at her, she’s become even thinner than the last time I saw her! Her face is so pale! Did you ever treat Tina with a proper meal or did you just satisfied her in bed like other women in the old times?”
“Wait…” Bette nervously looks at Tina who’s now raising her eyebrows; she opens her mouth, stunned. “Wha…?”
“You are bad at taking care of others, Bette Porter, how can you let your girlfriend be this skinny and unhealthy? Do you forget how to treat your partner properly? That Candace Jewell did mess up with your head for too long, didn’t she? I told you, I told you to get rid of her earlier.”
“Bette treats me fine, Kit.” Tina giggles. “When she is not so stubborn.”
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Hi CJ,
I wanted to wish you a beautiful Birthday again!!!
What a wonderful surprise you gave us today.
After dinner i hope to read it and leave a comment ????????
Hi CJ,
That was a incredible update!!!!
Bette is so cute and so happy that she has Tina back!!!
I had to laugh very hard when i read this:
“Wiping her last tear away, Kit returns back to her stern face to the detective and smack hard on the back of Bette’s head.
“Aw! What the fuck, Kit?”
“What are you doing, baby sis, look at her, she’s become even thinner than the last time I saw her! Her face is so pale! Did you ever treat Tina with a proper meal or did you just satisfied her in bed like other women in the old times?”
“Wait…” Bette nervously looks at Tina who’s now raising her eyebrows; she opens her mouth, stunned. “Wha…?”
So funny, i love Kit and how she hugged and greeted Tina!
Tina need and deserve to have a family who love and care about her.
You use all the characters from the original show, Kate Arden as Tina’s boss who has a crush on her, and Kit’s former boyfriend as FBI agent. You had me worried for a moment.
The man in black who left Tina the message, she felt a danger, but he only left her the message that Faye Buckley joined the game. Who is he and how does the person who wrote the message the way Tina and Carmen communicated in the past?
I am worried about the side effect that the drugs left Tina, she needs her brain and quick thinking but if she shared her master game with Bette i have to trust that together they will win this game.
The game is on!!!
Thank you so much for the shout out and this incredible journey you take us on!!!
Aaah, this sucks!!! My comment has disappeared ????
Will try to find it and post again!
Hi CJ,
I send you a PM, my comment is awaiting moderation, seems i used a word that isn’t allowed ????
Happy Birthday, CJ!
And i like that picture!
I hope Alice not recognizing Tina, when they meet, because if she do – it will be a problem.
Ok, so Backey and Aaron only one who’s left – interesting will be read how Tibette handling with them
Just logged in to wish you Happy Belated Birthday. Though my greeting is reaching little late, but I hope that it’ll bring plenty of happiness on your face.
Hola cj me encantó este capitulo cada día se pone más bueno y esperando el otro gracias
Happy belated birthday CJ. Thanks for this new chapter, Not looking good for Tina with the FBI sniffing around. Hope she trusts Bette to help her take down Faye and Aaron.
Hi CJ:
Happy birthday again, my friend. ????????????????????????????????????
The picture you put here is not only a gift to yourself but for many of us; happy times that perhaps won’t come back. ????????????????
Excellent chapter, Tina and Bette are a wonderful couple again. I like very much how protective is Bette for her girlfriend and lover.
Tina is in a hard place, her boss Kate is interested in her and of course, she is not, but who knows how Kate could react.
Buckley and Aaron, that is a dangerous alliance against Tina, and Bette; because Buckley may have more than one reason to hurt Bette and even being a stupid, Aaron will want to do anything in his power to smash Tina and his former undercovered spy in the Cooper empire. I’m wondering if James is doing something to help Tina.
Nice story, CJ, it is getting exciting.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter again.
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Happy Birthday, CJ! Thank you for continuing your great story. I love this photo of Tibet. They were so young and happy. Keep up the good work and keep Tina and Bette safe from Aaron and Faye. PPS