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The Most Distant Course
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Max’s face doesn’t ever change, “Everything was my own decision, Senator and the Commander has nothing to do with this.”
“You…”
“Ma’am,” Helena stands out. “I believe it’s better to let Senator Buckley and Commander Kornbluth explain themselves, or else, there is no use we stand here and listen for Agent Sweeney’s confession.”
“I agree with the DA,” Joyce says. “This case involves too much, we shouldn’t act rashly, this has involved too many people, especially the reputation of detective Bette Porter.”
Phyllis lets out a huge sigh, hand rubs her nose bridge.
“Yes, Bette Porter, she is talented…”
Seeing it’s the time, Helena initiates.
“Ma’am, allow me to get Senator back to you, and…”
“No,” Phyllis cuts in. “No need to, you will find Faye Buckley, but not to me.”
Helena frowns. “Ma’am? What do you mean?”
“Taking my permission, you are going to be in charge of this case, and the first thing you do…is to search Senator Faye Buckley’s office.”
Helena’s eyes slightly widen.
“Pardon me…Governor…did you say…search for the Senator of California’s private office?”
“Yes, did you not hear me?” Phyllis rolls her eyes.
“I thought it was the FBI Commander Aaron Kornbluth who needs to be suspected?” Helena asks.
Joyce nods. “Exactly, DA, exactly, but don’t you think it’s such a coincidence that everything happened? Especially the part of Superior Court…Aaron Kornbluth does not have the authority, how could he move Shane Mccutcheon there without anyone noticing?”
“Joyce is right, also, Aaron Kornbluth was not smart enough to do so, this fucking…plan could only be set up by one person and one person only.”
Washington, DC. FBI headquarters.
“What did you say?” Faye Buckley asks. “Phyllis Kroll asked Max Sweeney to meet her?”
“Yes, it seems like the Governor has found out something, or else she wouldn’t personally ask an FBI agent to meet her.”
“This is not good…” Faye Buckley mutters.
“What’s wrong? Mother?”
“Max Sweeney has betrayed the FBI, to force Bette Porter’s hand, I purposely let Max Sweeney be their inside person, allowing him to bring the rebels into the Police Department…But we cannot tell this to Phyllis Kroll.”
“That’s right, in the Governor’s eyes, Max Sweeney is not only the Senior Executive agent, but he’s also the hero of the FBI after he was known to be undercover in the Cooper organization…The Governor will think that it was by your instructions.” Candace Jewell says.
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Hi CJ:
Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.
Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.
Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.
Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.
CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.
Thanks CJ the story is amazing.
P
Hi CJ,
Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!
Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.
Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.
I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.
But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.
Again, a fantastic story!!!
Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.
Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.
Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.
You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?
What a great Chapter!
So many answers but I need you to post again really, really quickly on Tina’s Condition.
Please, please it is cruel to leave us hanging!
Post soon, real soon! Please!
SG