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The Most Distant Course
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“Governor,” Joyce is trying to calm Phyllis down., her voice is soft and peaceful. “We just need to investigate clearly what happened, don’t be angry, let’s take it one step at a time.”
The Governor snorts angrily.
“I already suspected that something was strange, that criminal Shane McCutcheon was jailed securely within San Diego Police Department, with lots of armed guards keeping watch, unless someone gathered troops or terrorism, otherwise who would have the ability to abduct a prisoner? But for some reason, the prisoner was moved to the Superior Court.”
The Governor points her finger at Max.
“Tell me, was it you who brought the attackers into the San Diego Police Department?”
Max takes a deep breath, the tension in the room rises to the top when they are waiting for his answer.
“Yes.”
Well, that was half true.
But it sure will put the Governor in high rage.
“Great, what a great scheme! You even deceived me! When the San Diego Police Department was attacked by rebels, even with such strong capabilities, not a single rebel, dead or alive was captured. Instead, I am told the prisoner got away because the investigation team of Detective Porter was obstructing…how dare you? Agent?”
Helena has been very quiet since she’s walked in the office, she’s being told that this scene is going to happen very soon Shane being arrested. At Christmas, Tina took a visit to her mother and her, asking for the help of this mission.
The DA remembers every word the beautiful blonde said. Especially, she mentioned that very soon Max Sweeney will be summoned, the Governor would ask for her.
Tina Kennard totally blew her mind away.
So far, every move was just like what Tina Kennard has anticipated…and she has been offered an assignment.
Helena Peabody stands out.
“Ma’am, this is not a small case, I don’t think agent Max Sweeney could have acted alone. There must be someone else that is the mastermind behind this.”
“Does that need to be said? Who does he work for? Who is able to order him?”
The Governor watches angrily at Max as if her eyes can burn a hole in him.
“Did Aaron Kornbluth and Faye Buckley tell you how they are going to do after they lie to me? Hmm?”
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Hi CJ:
Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.
Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.
Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.
Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.
CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.
Thanks CJ the story is amazing.
P
Hi CJ,
Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!
Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.
Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.
I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.
But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.
Again, a fantastic story!!!
Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.
Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.
Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.
You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?
What a great Chapter!
So many answers but I need you to post again really, really quickly on Tina’s Condition.
Please, please it is cruel to leave us hanging!
Post soon, real soon! Please!
SG