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    The Most Distant Course

    “Because you want something from me.”

    “Which is?”

    “I will soon find out.”

    “Well then, good luck, Commander,” Tina replies politely.

     

    California, SF. Governor of California Office.

    In the meantime, when both Phyllis and Joyce are still in shock, the Governor’s secretary walks in.

    “Ma’am, the DA is here.”

    Phyllis leans her back on the chair, rubbing her soar temple.

    “Send her in.” 

    The secretary nods, making a gesture and another woman walks in.

    “Governor.” It’s District Attorney, Helena Peabody.

    “Good, good, you are here,” Phyllis waves her hand impatiently. “Go on then, listen to what he’s said.”

    “What did you do to Shane? Agent?” Helena asks again.

    “I killed her,” Max says quietly. “She was a member of the Cooper Organization, she is one of the people who participated in committing serious crimes, she has already lived for too many years, I will never let a bastard like her live one more day.”

    Phyllis slams her desk angrily. “She already was going to be sentenced to the death penalty, do you know that?”

    “Shane McCutcheon was only a pawn in the Cooper Organization, she wasn’t the main instigator. Besides, the people will favor Detective Bette Porter if she risks her life to protest for Shane detention, the judges may be swayed…In order to make sure all the criminals being wiped out, I must take action first.” Max replies.

    “You…” The Governor is pissed off. “Even till now you are still accusing Detective Porter! Who ordered you?”

    “As a spy, we have to make the essential decisions all the time, therefore, I did these things on my own accord.”

    Phyllis clenches her fist. “Humph, you did it all by yourself? You alone can keep this from Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornbluth? And move Shane to the prisons in the Superior Court? How can you alone deliberately transfer the San Diego Police Department’s guard away? Just by yourself, how are you able to plan and orchestrate a feigned attack? You, Aaron Kornbluth and Faye Buckley have been deceiving me from the very start!”

    Phyllis’s temper rises up after every word she’s said, if there’s not a desk between her and the FBI agent, it’s very possible that she’s already punched Max Sweeney’s face dozens time.

    Comments

    1. Hi CJ:

      Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.

      Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.

      Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.

      Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.

      CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.

      Thanks CJ the story is amazing.

      P

    2. Hi CJ,

      Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!

      Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.

      Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.

      I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.

      But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.

      Again, a fantastic story!!!

    3. Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.

      Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.

      Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.

      You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?

    4. What a great Chapter!

      So many answers but I need you to post again really, really quickly on Tina’s Condition.

      Please, please it is cruel to leave us hanging!

      Post soon, real soon! Please!

      SG

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