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The Promise
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Shane: Its Kristal Anniversary Label!…only the best for my favorite girls.
Alice: GIRLS? So then there are more now?
Dash: Damn Straight!
Dash reached behind her back and slowly pulled a giant Crocodile Dundee type knife. She swiped it along the neck of the bottle, ripping out the cork and tearing off part of the neck in the process.
Shane: Now thats a knife.
Alice gasped and leaned as far away as Shanes death gripped thighs would allow. The champagne spilled over from the bottle and poured over the three of them. Dash looked down at the terrified Alice and laughed. She leaned in and brushed her lips across Shanes and whispered into her mouth.
Dash: I want to grow up to be just like you Shane.
Shane pulled Dash in for a heated kiss that left her grinding her hips. Alices jaw dropped. She didnt know how Shane could have the audacity to not only setup this ridiculous fantasy, but she also had the nerve to straddle and grind into Alice while kissing a kid right in front of her.
Alice: What the ***** Shane! Shes a kid! I knew you were ***** her!
Alice tried to push Shane off of her but she wasnt strong enough. Somehow Shanes tiny fragile frame had the strength of a grown man. Dash pushed Alices hair out of her face and leaned in until they were nearly kissing. Alice turned her head in disgust. She soon felt the hot moisture of Dashs breath in her ear.
Dash: Teach me Alice….show me everything you know and like….I want to learn from the woman who tamed the famous Shane of WeHo….even if it was only for a week.
Alice turned back in astonishment only to find her open mouth captured by Dashs. The young girl started with a rough insistent kiss that soon turned into a soft imploring one. She wanted Alice to take the lead which she soon did. Alice felt something familiar about the kiss. Her lips began to tingle as the kiss deepened. She realized that kissing Dash was like kissing Shane, only you could tell the young girl had less experience. She also wore the Lip Venom gloss that Shane wore, which made her mouth feel like it just received a bee sting. She would definitely need someone to teach her, and Alice was now more than willing to comply.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.