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The Promise
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I am the man on the side
hoping youll make up your mind
I am the one who will swallow his pride
living life as the man on the side…
Alice: Its over! Now grab a hold of yourself…the ***** was good but come on Alice!
Alice shook her head and stood up as she peeled off her sweaty tank top.
Alice: Who am I kidding…that was probably the best ***** I had and ever will have for the rest of my life.
Alice walked topless to the bathroom and flipped on the light, kicking the door closed with her foot. She kicked off her jeans and sneakers leaving them in the middle of the floor.
Alice: Ha! I can rebel too…And theyll stay there in the middle of the floor until Im good and ready to pick them up Ms. McCutcheon.
Alice hopped into the shower and cranked up the heat as high as she could take it. N She let the fire hose pressured nozzle pelt away at her skin until her body was pruned and bright red. Alice pulled open the curtain, and shook her head side to side playfully like a wet dog. She hopped out and pulled one of the fresh towels from the closet. As she opened it and wrapped it around herself, she could smell the scent of the dryer sheets and fabric softener wafting over her. Two things she never cared about when doing laundry. She got out of that luxury quickly when she started doing her own laundry in college. But since Shane did the laundry and shopping this week, she found her apartment was full of all types of surprises…the first being food.
Alice secured the towel around her waist and opened the bathroom door. As she walked out into the bedroom, a thick cloud of steam drifted out with her. The steam was so thick she could barely see around her. As the haze began to clear, it settled at her waist level.
Alice looked to her right to see a giant mahogany four-poster bead that was covered in large white down pillows and baby blue satin sheets. She gasped as she looked up at the canopy. There she saw white satin draped over the edges and dangling low to the ridge of the bed like curtains. She walked over to the bed and ran her hand over the sheets. They felt warm and silken under her skin, like she was running her hand through warm body oil.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.