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    The Roommates – Pride & Prejudice: Chapter 8

    She headed in the direction of the agreed upon eatery and smiled upon seeing its signature candy-cane striped red and white awning. As her long legs stepped up to cross the building’s threshold, a friendly and familiarly deep voice called out to her, “Bette!”

    Dark brown eyes squinted against the rays of sunshine and she looked up to see Damon jogging across the street to meet her in his loose-fitting, mid-calf length jean shorts and crisp designer t-shirt.

    In moments, he’d swooped up his female best-friend and spun her around on the street. They shared a warm hug and genuine smiles before they separated with comforting sighs. It was then that Damon introduced the beautiful young woman that had accompanied him on his journey.

    “Bette, this is my sister, Debbie. Deb, this is Bette.”

    And in the tradition of a timeless story-book fairy tale, the city-grade white noise of Times Square and the hustle-bustle of the surrounding populace took on a moment of suspended silence. Bette Porter’s dark brown eyes met the twinkling copper pools of Damon’s 23 year old sister. Those dark eyes couldn’t help but travel from the friendly copper colored eyes to the smooth coffee with cream skin and full, painted lips that met in a perfect, pillowy heart-shape. The long-lashes framing the copper colored eyes batted at a captivated Bette Porter and young woman from San Diego smiled in return.

    The magical master of time hit the play button on reality and suddenly life around Bette came back into focus as she shook hands with Debbie Lawrence.

    “Nice to finally meet you,” said Bette, their eyes continuing a steady and comforting level of contact.

    The copper eyes crinkled as a warm smile lit up the windows to Damon’s sister’s soul and she replied, “Likewise.”

    “Let’s go eat,” Damon announced before leading the way into the restaurant.

    Bette cleared her throat as she and Debbie’s hands separated and the older woman followed Damon’s lead. As they walked in and were seated, her dark eyes couldn’t help but notice Debbie’s crisp New York style….the shortly cropped and curled hair that was reminiscent of a young Halle Berry and accentuated the striking beauty of the 23 year old. Her black crepe pants fell loosely around her size 6 hips and pooled at a pair of black designer sandals. A dressy black tank dipped down at her less-than-super-busty but more than nothing-there breasts and her tanned and toned arms revealed a most tantalizing physique.

    Comments

    1. These girls are just so into each other they’re having trouble staying focused. I agree with bombasticbully. There is drama up ahead!! I love your long posts. Thanks for sharing your talent with us once again. PPS

    2. MTS–I’m sensing drama on the horizon in the guise of Debbie and Eric! Let’s get Bette and Tina together in LA sooner than the 2 weeks! I’m holding up a banner in hopes that will happen. PPS

    3. You know that summer is over with and schools are back in session? Bette and Tina are trying so hard to survive with this long distance between them. Please help them to continue to want to stay together.

    4. Awww MTS, you just made our day brighter! B’s reunion with Damon was very charming. They have been through a lot and they are sincerely bonded as close friends. Hmmm As for B meeting Debbie in the flesh, it was quite an experience for her, as they both share the same uncomprehension from some members of their families. Janice is being more perceptive of her daughter and we could appreciate her concern about B missing his father. B&T’s conversation was so sweet and honest, as usual. We smiled when Tina’s green monster of jealousy was so evident, while learning about Debbie. But above all, you can breathe and feel the magic of their love. You are taking us into a wonderful ride. Thanks for this marvellous update, MTS. We truly enjoyed it! PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)

    5. MTS, what happen? were are you? its been 2 whole years. i just found this story and was really in to it, and i thought that it being written a few years ago that it would be finished. NOTthe girls arn’t wispering to you any longer? Please, finish the story. its one of the best i’ve ever read. one of your silent readers. sarm

    6. Hello MTS, Great to have another wonderful piece of this puzzle from Your. I just adore the reality of Bette and Tina’s love for each other here. These girls so belong, willingly, to each other. There is not a question of that. And it is something that everyone around them can realize. David saw it, Debbie saw and even Gina saw it. They are so affected by each other that even 3000 miles can not quench their love and attraction. The night time calls are so sweet and precious. Can’t wait to reac more of this terrific tale. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    7. Hi MTS :-)I hope you are fine and safe. It’s been 4 years since your last post, hopefully you’ll be back and finishing this amazing story. Take care :-)

    8. Just reread the entire series and its still as good as the first time i read it. I see its been several years since your last post, but i hope you still find your way back to us one day and finish this great little tale. Until then, i guess we will have to use our imagination! Thanks, MTS!

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