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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 2

    Story written on November 1, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Love rain down on me

    “Well, uh, I umm” ‘Holy ***** why am I so nervous? It’s only my girlfriend’s mom interrogating me… wait… GIRLFRIEND?!!!’

    “Mama stop interrogating my friend” Carmen said standing at the doorway.

    ‘Wow’ was the only word that came to mind when she saw her.

    Carmen was dressed in hip hugger acid-washed jeans and a black long sleeved shirt with her hair down framing her face. To Shane, she couldn’t look more beautiful… except maybe if she wasn’t wearing anything at all.

    It took a second to realize that Carmen said friend, not girlfriend. Why did she expect her to say girlfriend though? Either way, Shane concluded that Ms. Morales didn’t know.

    “I’m just making conversacin and joo had better put on something more then that”

    “Yes mama” Carmen responded by rolling her eyes over dramatically.

    “haga no usted arrolla sus ojos en m nio or I’ll whoop you into next week” Ms. Morales said as she got up to check on the rest of the food.

    Checking that her mother wasn’t looking, Carmen threw her hands up in the air in defeat and walked over to the table and around Shane, placing a finger on the top of Shane’s hand and trailing it up her arm over her shoulder, and back down the other arm. Shane could swear she felt the heat from her finger tip through her wet jacket as it seared a trail of fire over her skin. She involuntarily shivered as a result.

    Carmen smirked and shoveled a spoon full of rice and beans past her lips, making an over exaggerated moan as savored the taste. “Ma this is really good”.

    Shane was going to kill her.

    “Thank you bebe, Maria and Ricardo are bringing the nietos over for dinner tonight”

    “My brother and sister” Carmen responded to Shane’s pissed/annoyed/questioning look. “Well we’re going to go Mama, don’t wait up”

    “Come here and give me a kiss, you’re not to old for that” Ms. Morales said as she waited with her hands on her hips.

    Carmen got up and walked around Shane again (minus the finger) to give her mother a hug and a kiss. “Te quiero”

    “You too lucirnaga. Have fun and be safe”

    Shane vaguely knew enough Spanish to understand the gist of what Ms. Morales was saying. A skill she picked up in her younger years in Santa Monica, (You should always know what someone is saying because you never know if they’re talking about you, whether in a good way or in a potentially violent way) but what she didn’t understand was the word ‘lucirnaga’ and made a mental note to ask Carmen about it later.

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    1. yay, i’m the first one! “ugh, i’m turning into such a lez.” that is so shane :). your writing has left me once again speechless. i love the details. you’re doing a great job sprinkling in carmen’s thoughts. much love!

    2. I’ll say it again, though myself a diehard Danish fan, you are making it hard not to jump ship. Not really but I guess I’ll have to have two ships now. Great story telling, and keep it coming. Hey and if you every want to write a danish story, I’ll be you number one fan. No stones please. Great story, looking foward to the next chapter. Deb

    3. Whew. Let me just get my heartrate to return to normal, and catch my breath! hah, thank you soooooooooo much for filling my Sharmen addiction. I completely agree, that there aren’t enough Sharmen fics. I guess it is a good thing in some ways though, because not everyone can get Shane down very well. You, however, do a VERY good job of writing her. Props to ya!

    4. Very nice! You just had to end it when it was getting good, eh? I guess this is what I get from teasing my readers; Shane-style Karma coming back to bite me in the ass. ;) Love the “tell me you don’t want this” bit – so hot! Totally can’t wait for the next part.

    5. Damn! That was HOT! Movie theatre is a great place for a makeout session, brought bach some great memories :) Loved Alice freaking out over the phone especially the drug dealer comment. Keep up the great work, Post soon.

    7. thank you for this update!It´s really good to see someone writing sharmen storys again.You really should have start earlier with writing. I love you story and I think this is just a slow start, that you have a lot of more in your mind.

    9. Yep. Love that line, tell me you don’t want this. Who would regist Shane’s charisma? One of my fav is shane’s thoughts. She is so cute. Second thing, Al and Shane’s chat is hilarius.The way you characterized is so real. Let me admire you! :)

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