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Wanna Date? Chapter 20 (Conclusion)
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In the blink of an eye, Bette reached for her, and enveloped her in tight embrace.
“Oh my God Tina, I’m so happy,” she gasped. “This is just.. it’s ..”
She pulled back, and took Tina’s face in her hands, showering her with kisses that made Tina giggle.
“I (kiss) love (kiss) you (kiss) so (kiss) much (kiss)”
Tina pushed her away playfully, noticing the tears of happiness that filled her eyes. She reached up to stroke her face, wiping them away tenderly.
“I know we still have a lot to talk about babe, but I really want us to do this together,” Tina said seriously.
Right now Bette didn’t care about birthing tanks, art shows, past lovers(even Helena), moving Tina’s things before the baby came, therapy sessions or even worries about being a parent. Tina was here, they were together, and this time, she would do everything right. Life was perfect at this moment, and Bette Porter thanked her lucky stars, God, fate, Dr Wilson and her sonogram machine, their unborn child and Birthing Pools-R-Us.
“Together,” Bette agreed. “I like the sound of that.”
As she drove them to the hospital, Bette thought she was floating on air. Things were working out for them finally, and she couldn’t stop looking over at Tina and smiling at her. However, after the third driver honked in annoyance at them for not moving on a green light, Bette thought she better keep her mind on the road. Now was not the time for any little accidents.
Instead she reached over to hold Tina’s hand, confident that she could handle the steering wheel perfectly well with her left hand.
“Maybe we can go over to your apartment and pack up some stuff later,” Bette suggested. “I mean, we don’t have long before the baby, and you’ll want your clothes and things won’t you?”
Tina nodded absently, thinking about the upcoming check-up and the tour of the maternity unit they were taking, just in case it was needed. She looked over at Bette, watching those beautiful lips moving, but not really listening to the sounds coming out. Tina was preoccupied imagining several different scenarios involving Bette’s lips, and maybe her hands too. Possibly the rest of her body could join in as well.
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Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Nicely written, I hope you write soon.
first and second luvs..lol..ok no no no “the end” the right is TBC ok?..i love it this is what we all wanna see on the show..i hope you continue great chapter thanks
Thank you so much for a job so well done. If you should decide not to do any more fanfic, know that you have contributed a wonderful work to this site.
Thank you!
Excellent job cogent. Please write again though, you’ll be missed. You did a great job of filling in gaps left by the show. This has definitely been one of my favourite stories. Thanks for writing.
I loved this whole story. Are we looking at another part??? Excellent. I wish sum1 would just kill off Helena or have her leave and never come back, or get her ass beat so bad she knows not to fuck with them any more.
dont know whether to laugh or cry. this was so good. it gave me what was missing from the show. please write something again soon.
I wonder from reading the last part if they had gotten back together in the beginning and then went to the hospital would the episode feel different.Great job.I hope you pop up soon with another story.
You’ve filled in the gaps beautifully! I absolutely loved this story and hope really hope that you write another story to showcase your talent. Thanks!!!
You did a wonderful job on this story. Just know we will be wait on another one from you if you decide to write more. THANKS
Thank you for a wonderful ending. The way it should have been. Much more emotional and loving than IC version. You are a amazing writer and I hope we get to see more stories soon.
Thank you Cogent53, for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it immensly and look forward to whatever other stories you might contribute in the future.
EXCEL-fucking-LENT! Stories should have happy endings always. Real life has too much drama and misery as it is. You made my day.
I hope you write some more.
I did not always comment but wanted to thank you for the great story and hope you write more soon.
that was great hope you post soon…i just crack up everytime i hear the “step off bitch” line
What a good and excellent ending story and can’t wait to see you post soon. Please keep continue with the story, thank you!
WOO HOO! that was so Beautiful Amazing Writing and Dialog WHOA! Tina she is really Great to tell Helena about yeah So STEP OFF BITCH LOL! I Love it WOW! I’m trying to go to sleep but I see you posted again Thanks Please post soon.
great story – thanks for filling in the gaps!
WOW! I just see the last THE END SNIFF SNIFF OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.
cogent, I absolutely loved your version of the last few episodes of Season 2. Your writing style is splendid and refreshing. Thank you sooo much for sharing your talents with us. I’m incredibly happy that you decided to post this story. I truly hope you return to us with a new one soon!
Great story! please write more!! :)
EXCELLENT Story.. either continue or please write another I like your style. Thanks for taking the time.
Thankyou for you excellent story youve filled in so many blanks that were left out in the series… looking forward to more from you whenever thanks
Great story….thanks for filling in the gaps!!Please write another
thank you for that wonderful story and ending…please post the new one soon!!! we’ll all be waiting. please make it a happy story!
Brilliant, just brilliant!!
K
Wonderful story, sad it’s over. Hope you write more soon.
Great story! I have enjoyed reading it and I think you did a fabulous job of giving us some dialogues that was needed that was not in the show.
thanks- i certainly enjoyed reading this! hope to see another from you soon.
Just letting you know how much I have enjoyed this, I’m sorry that this was the last chapter and do hope that you will do another story. You are a good writer.
Thank you for a wonderful story. It filled in a lot of gaps left last season and it was wonderful to read. I hope you continue to write FanFic stories…I look forwards to them. Again, thank you.