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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 9 – THE TRAP

    Caleb: “what happens if someone else takes the box?”

    Dr. Buckley: “it won’t happen”

    Caleb: “I’m sure you will be careful but just in case something happens and another person opens the box”

    Dr. Buckley: “well, in that case I could retake the box and close it, but it doesn’t matter if Bette is not the one who opens the box, she just needs to be close, indeed everybody who was close enough the box would be sucked by the black hole that forms and will be transported very far”

    Caleb: “just for curiosity…, how far you must be from the box in order to be swallowed by the device?”

    Dr. Buckley: “well, according to Glory if you are at six feet you could be suctioned, but at ten feet you are safe”

    Caleb: “thanks for the information, then remember to stay at least at ten feet away when the box opens”

    Master: “in case that you fail in the first attempt, is there a duplicate that we could use to try again?”

    Dr. Buckley: “hey…, this is not a computer game; I said I will do it”

    First Evil: “well, if Dr. Buckley fails, we may have another similar gadget but another person will need to use it because Dr. Buckley won’t be here”

    Tianna Buckley swallowed a lump in her throat; she knows very well if she fails, she dies.

    Master: “do we have a list of the places where we are going to open new portals?”

    Caleb: (pointing a map that appeared on the wall) “here it is, we will open initially 10 replicas of the Hellmouth in these places, Regent Street in New London, Qianmen Street in New Beijing, Via Giulia in Roma Nova, Avenida Rio Branco in Rio Velho de Janeiro, Muizz Street in New El Cairo, Colaba Causeway in Mumbai Annex, Long Street in New Cape Town, Bondi Road in New Sydney, Sultanahmet Square in New Istanbul and New Turnbull Canyon Road in New LA”

    Master: “are we going to send our forces there?”

    First Evil: “some…, no all our army, just a very little delegation, to scare the people there, we will center our army on the wormhole, we will use the distraction, to annex their laboratory and invade their installations”

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    1. Hey proteonomics, welcome back!

      Only one chapter left ????, wow didn’t expected that.

      I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter when they destroy the First Evil for good.

      Please don’t let Kit open that box, i don’t want her or everyone else disappear for good.

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story proteonomics!

    2. Hi Bibi:

      Yes, is only one chapter left and I hope to post it next week, but I also hope our lovely couple, if they survive, of course, will continue their adventures in the future.

      When I started writing the story, I, honestly, was expecting to finish it on last October, but several things came in the way, among them a big hurricane and consequently lot of work, but finally, we are here, in the verge of ending this adventure.

      Thank you so much, Bibi, for being such an excellent reader and commenter, you as other readers are the vital force of stories, because in my opinion, without readers stories would be only ideas, personal reflections, cathartic notes, isolated essays from our souls and minds.

      I’m honored that you read and comment on my stories.

      Thanks Bibi

      P

    3. Hi proteonomics,

      Thank you for your kind words ????.

      But if you want me to continue to read your stories, you must let Bette and Tina survive this war, without Tibette in love and happy i will be devastated and crying my heart out ????.

      I would love to read about them when they are older like in Tina’s dream.

      Please, can you promise to a loyal reader that you will not harm Bette and Tina and not break my poor heart?

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