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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 9 – THE TRAP

    Someone entered the station, is Caleb, the favorite living dead of the First.

    Caleb: “how many vamps still need to recover?”

    Antonia: “there are six more, sucking blood and two others devouring flesh”

    Caleb: “I think they can do that by themselves…, we need people to serve in the headquarters, come with me”

    Antonia was only one time before in the First Evil’s headquarters, the time she was diverted from her transition to the world of the dead. She is trusting that the First Evil has forgotten about her, and who her daughter is.

    In the headquarters, the First Evil has gathered his high-rank officers, this is an emergency meeting.

    First Evil: “we had lost the 85% of our forces and we are running low in servants, most of the living dead have run away to the world of the dead and 30 % of our remaining vamps are wounded, but fortunately in process of regeneration, we need to take extreme measures”

    Master: “are we going to ask for a truce?”

    First Evil: “we could, but I guess they won’t allow that, as soon as they know our situation they will make their final attack and destroy us”

    General Wilkins: “you plan to kidnap Rossi’s daughter again?”

    First Evil: “later…, first we have to attack their weak points…, the earth…, we need to distract them and gain some territories, we will open several portals in different parts of the planet, and then we’ll regroup and attack Porter’s daughter, and kidnap Rossi’s child”

    Caleb: “so, when will we open the other portals?”

    First Evil: “that is why I called this meeting, I need to know the state of our forces, when are they going to be ready for a battle?”

    Caleb: “most of them are on the way to heal, I think a couple of days more and we will be ready”

    First Evil: “fine, let’s plan our attack and the points for the new portals, Glory, I want you on earth as soon as the closest portal to New Pasadena opens, you can take some minions with you…, and you Dr. Buckley, Glory will instruct you on the use of that gadget, the trap to trick Porter’s daughter, you must follow her instructions to the letter and we’ll win this war…, now we must eat and celebrate our next victory”

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    1. Hey proteonomics, welcome back!

      Only one chapter left ????, wow didn’t expected that.

      I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter when they destroy the First Evil for good.

      Please don’t let Kit open that box, i don’t want her or everyone else disappear for good.

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story proteonomics!

    2. Hi Bibi:

      Yes, is only one chapter left and I hope to post it next week, but I also hope our lovely couple, if they survive, of course, will continue their adventures in the future.

      When I started writing the story, I, honestly, was expecting to finish it on last October, but several things came in the way, among them a big hurricane and consequently lot of work, but finally, we are here, in the verge of ending this adventure.

      Thank you so much, Bibi, for being such an excellent reader and commenter, you as other readers are the vital force of stories, because in my opinion, without readers stories would be only ideas, personal reflections, cathartic notes, isolated essays from our souls and minds.

      I’m honored that you read and comment on my stories.

      Thanks Bibi

      P

    3. Hi proteonomics,

      Thank you for your kind words ????.

      But if you want me to continue to read your stories, you must let Bette and Tina survive this war, without Tibette in love and happy i will be devastated and crying my heart out ????.

      I would love to read about them when they are older like in Tina’s dream.

      Please, can you promise to a loyal reader that you will not harm Bette and Tina and not break my poor heart?

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