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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 9 – THE TRAP

    Louise: “yes, we could, but we have to focus on finding the way to do that immediately those portals appear, otherwise, demons and vamps could cross and attack people”

    Sharon: “but you said that the First Evil’s army is diminished in 85%, do you think they are a real threat?”

    Louise: “well, I don’t think they are very dangerous, but we can’t assume that…, we need to protect the people”

    Kit: “what if this is a distraction to attack our positions”

    Louise: “it is a distraction, we have to be conscious of that, they’ll try to head off our attention and invade the lab”

    Angus: “I don’t understand, Louise…, why are we going to let them cajole us?”

    Louise: “no, we don’t, we’ll send smart probes to places where new portals will be created by the First, but we have all our troops on alert here, they will be ready to counter attack, and I will send our warriors along with members of the support team, they will use combat f-cars”

    Melvin: “well, this is new; are you taking the decision to do that because of Tina’s nightmares, and the fact that you met her future double in her dreams?”

    Louise: “yes, and also because my informant warned me that if we don’t do it, Bette will be lost forever”

    Now, Melvin was scared, and that showed on his face. Initially, all the members of the board were a little surprised by Louise information, planes and decisions, like she had already everything calculated, even Sharon was a little bit shocked. But now all makes sense, yes, Louise has calculated all the possible moves and has brought the results of her research and strategy here to them, but those results are useful, clear and correct. After a few minutes more of discussion, everybody agreed on Louise’s plans and decisions.

    Now, the second meeting took place in the dining room, some of the Scoobies were allowed to participate. Louise told all the members about the new decision of ordering the squad teams to use combat f-cars and to be accompanied by members of the support team. The announcement made most of the warriors happy, especially the couples on which one is a warrior and the other a lab team member. Tina and Bette were thrilled, now they could be together all the time taking care of each other.

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    1. Hey proteonomics, welcome back!

      Only one chapter left ????, wow didn’t expected that.

      I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter when they destroy the First Evil for good.

      Please don’t let Kit open that box, i don’t want her or everyone else disappear for good.

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story proteonomics!

    2. Hi Bibi:

      Yes, is only one chapter left and I hope to post it next week, but I also hope our lovely couple, if they survive, of course, will continue their adventures in the future.

      When I started writing the story, I, honestly, was expecting to finish it on last October, but several things came in the way, among them a big hurricane and consequently lot of work, but finally, we are here, in the verge of ending this adventure.

      Thank you so much, Bibi, for being such an excellent reader and commenter, you as other readers are the vital force of stories, because in my opinion, without readers stories would be only ideas, personal reflections, cathartic notes, isolated essays from our souls and minds.

      I’m honored that you read and comment on my stories.

      Thanks Bibi

      P

    3. Hi proteonomics,

      Thank you for your kind words ????.

      But if you want me to continue to read your stories, you must let Bette and Tina survive this war, without Tibette in love and happy i will be devastated and crying my heart out ????.

      I would love to read about them when they are older like in Tina’s dream.

      Please, can you promise to a loyal reader that you will not harm Bette and Tina and not break my poor heart?

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