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WESTERN SKIES
Tina – But I would like to be true to the general architecture. If you don’t mind, I would like to see the house as well.
She spreads blueberry jam on a biscuit.
Kit – Sure! I’ll show you after we eat.
She takes a sip of tea.
Tina – It’s an amazing property, Kit!
Kit – Thanks!
Tina – And the food is delicious!
Kit – It’s all homemade! From the tea, to the jam, to the biscuit, the eggs and the honey!
Tina – It’s a dream of mine to live this way. How long have you been here?
She takes a bite of her biscuit.
Kit – Oh, we grew up here! Dad was a successful attorney in Denver and we spent all our free time at the ranch: vacations, holidays, many weekends … Before he married his third wife, he gave the ranch to me and Bette.
She eats a spoonful of honey and berries.
Kit – Mmm … You need to eat some berries with honey, girl! If it’s good for the bears, it’s good for us!
She puts a spoonful of assorted berries on a bowl and gives it to the blonde. Tina smiles.
Tina – Thanks, they look amazing!
Kit – Anyway … Bette actually moved in here during her teenage years, after Daddy remarried. She practically ran the ranch with Jim’s help. I was too busy with my music career and my problems for a while and later Bette went to college. Daddy continued supervising the ranch for many years. Some seven years ago, I cleaned up my act and decided to live a healthier lifestyle. I then moved in here and the rest is history!
Tina – By the way, my mom was a huge fan of yours! I grew up listening to your music. She got excited when I told her about meeting you.
Kit grins.
Kit – Oh, I’m always glad to hear from the fans! Please send her my love!
Tina – I will!
Kit – I tell you what … I’ll give her a signed picture of me in my heyday! Don’t let me forget it!
Tina – Thanks! She will love it!
She takes a sip of tea.
Tina – What about your dad? Is he in Denver?
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Bibi28 says
I promise to read every chapter as soon as possible, as long you keep posting them regurlarly ????
I love it, they are two proud woman as i see, but i already see the attraction.
Kit is a very nice woman and certainly not afraid to head butt with Bette.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
proteonomics says
dbff:
Great chapter, thanks for the rapid update. I like your story very much.
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Zhenya says
Hi, thanks for the update!
I promise read and comment regularly too)
I like how you developing your story, so waiting for the next.
Sorry, but can’t help about editing old posts – maybe you need to write messege to Jacky (https://lesfan.com/members/jacky/)
leonora says
I love the storyline and your writing style is great! I can’t wait for the next chapters!
Alexx says
Thank you for the creat chapter!
Bette in wet t-shirt – nice)
Waiting for the next chapters.
SassyGran says
I promise you that if you keep posting regularly I will read them as soon as I am able.
Love the 3 Characters you have given us here and look forward to your story unfolding.
Thanks for posting please post again soon.
SG
BlueFlame7 says
Great descriptive writing. Im hooked! PPS
MissOne says
Great chapter!
Good to see that Tina and Bette start talking, but don’t know how i feel about T saw Bette’s picture without her permission
Interesting plot, waiting for the next update!
Therese_Belivet says
Dear dbff
I’m currently discovering this other story, being “orphan” from your After The Kiss *wink* and I’m already hooked !
You have a truly cinematic eye – and I’m a huge cinema passionate. I can see Kit’s ranch and every details as if I was admiring them through Tina’s eyes and, well, to imagine Bette as a cowgirl is very sexy, I must say !
Since I adore western movies, I cannot help but remembering the great Missy, my favorite classic actress : pretty fiery, even arrogant but mesmerizing too – our poor Tina has no chance to resist !
Thank you so very much for this new delightful journey, my dear writer :-)
A.
dbff says
I’m so glad you found this story, A.! It’s for Tibetters like you!
ps: I had to check, but I believe you were referring to Barbara Stanwyck! :D
Therese_Belivet says
Yes indeed !
Well, what can I say ? “Cowgirl” immediately makes me think about Stanwyck in one of her westerns (like The Furies, The Moonlighter or Forty Guns) – even if this marvelously versatile actress was great in every other movie genres possible *wink*
And, well, her voice is the sexiest I have ever heared… Not a beauty but what a charm – more dangerous, the charm !
So now that you already know two of my absolute favorite ladies, Jennifer Beals and “Missy”, I five your the last two : my first teenage crush, Vivien Leigh, and my biggest screen crush ever, Kate Winslet :-)
And you, if I can ask ? *big wink*
A,